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May 07, 2009 22:39

Title: Hate
Author: rolleson
Fandom: The Mentalist
Rating: PG
Character/Pairing: Slight Jane/Lisbon
Spoilers: 1.6 - Red Handed
Warnings: None
Summary: He wants her to keep the emeralds
Notes: First Mentalist fic, 600 words. I hate everything about you - Three Days Grace.

( Come on Lisbon, keep the emeralds. )

pairing: jane/lisbon, tv: the mentalist, fic: het

Comments 24

leah1813 May 7 2009, 21:51:29 UTC

Terrific job!

scruffyduck May 7 2009, 22:00:49 UTC

Thanks :)

highonstargate May 7 2009, 21:52:26 UTC

Oh, I loved it! They are so in character!

scruffyduck May 7 2009, 22:01:16 UTC

Cool, glad they're in character :)

scruffyduck May 10 2009, 12:57:08 UTC

Thank you :) i always worry about getting people in character.

angstbunny May 7 2009, 22:06:14 UTC

Another thing she hated about him, she only seemed to resort to violence around him.

THIS. YES.

scruffyduck May 10 2009, 12:59:16 UTC

artic_fox May 7 2009, 22:24:37 UTC

Oh, there needs to be more Jane/Lisbon fics about, and this was is totally fabulous. Nice job :D

scruffyduck May 10 2009, 13:03:30 UTC

Thanks. I have another on my mind. :)

evidenceshows May 8 2009, 02:33:42 UTC

Excellent work! It was very in character and hot too. I wish Patrick would whisper into my ear ;)

scruffyduck May 10 2009, 13:18:44 UTC

Hee :)