'Tis but the truth in a masquerade | Divergent | Tris/Four | PG13

May 16, 2011 21:18

Title: 'Tis but the truth in a masquerade
Fandom: Divergent
Pairing: Tris/Four
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: For all of Divergent.
Summary: A five things fic: four AUs that describe what life could have been like if Tris and Four had chosen differently, and one description of what reality holds for them now.
A/N: *flails* Hope you guys enjoy! Title is ( Read more... )

books: divergent, fic, ship: tris/four

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marble_rose May 18 2011, 08:54:07 UTC
This was absolutely perfect. I love how you took these two characters and made me believe that, no patter what path they would've chosen, they would've found one another. I love everything about this fic, and I really hope to read more from you.

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poptartmuse May 18 2011, 19:46:56 UTC
:3 AWW! Why thank you dear ♥ so so glad you enjoyed it!

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anonymous June 7 2011, 05:38:07 UTC
That was great to read. I finished Divergent 2 days ago but I already miss Tris anf Four, so it was great reading about them again, and you stayed really in character.
The one about candor was specially well writen because I had never imagined how it would be like if they were in candor but it sounded exactly how they would be.

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poptartmuse July 26 2011, 13:20:35 UTC
thank you so much!! i cannot wait for Insurgent, I just want more of Roth's world!

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thewindwarns July 25 2011, 23:50:22 UTC
Wow -- I agree that this was perfect, and especially loved the changes in Tris' name across factions.

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poptartmuse July 26 2011, 13:21:22 UTC
thank you so so much! I'm glad you liked that subtlety about the fic :D

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aimmyarrowshigh July 30 2011, 05:56:47 UTC
This is lovely! I thought I had already commented, but I guess I haven't -- hopefully LJ lets this go through. But anyway, I really enjoy your writing style and I'm impressed by how well you fleshed out the different variables of their lives in the different Factions (nicknames, rules, etc.)

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purely_distel September 11 2011, 16:11:39 UTC
oh brilliant! the amity one is especially heartbreaking and kind of asks for a second part ... I am amazed at how well you captured their character in each of these. Wonderful little fic! :)

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