Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 4

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Pairing: Ennis and Jack
Summary: Ennis and Jack are working as counselors on a children's camp for the summer. Their meeting on the first evening on the camp leads to a friendship neither had expected,

Comments

[big_heart_june]

But Ennis made no attempt to move. He heard Jack’s breath quicken and then settle into a steady rhythm. Ennis’s eyes focused on Jack’s hair. He wanted to touch it, to stroke it, to tangle his fingers in the black mass and hope it would untangle the confusion in his head.

Wow, Christie, that part was so gorgeously sexy. I love how the sexual tension and attraction is slowly building up between them. You've really spoilt us again with this long and lovely update. I was so glad Jack came looking for Ennis after that disastrous double date. :( Cindy gets on my nerves! lol and how sweet of Ennis to buy Jack the beers.
Heh heh to the Blues Brothers! And AWWWWWW to the Love Spoon Ennis made *claps hands* - how utterly sweet is that! LOVED Ennis checking out Jack's pic! Also loved the deserved praise Jack got from Bob and Jack's reaction to it. God, if I really let myself think of the way Jack was raised and spent his childhood I'd be bawling my eyes out...

Thanks as always, dear Christie. :) As usual this was a wonderful, lovely read and I look forward to more XXXXXX

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi June and thank you so so much for your lovely comment. Cindy seems to get on everyone's nerves - I wonder why? lol I'm so glad you are enjoying it and thanks so much for reading!