Haunted [Chapter 3]

[poppy_sky]

Rating: PG13
Warnings: Horror themes.
Summary: The Dong Bang apartment has become too crowded. When more living space is needed, the boys will ask the company for new living quarters. When they arrive at the destination they are met with their dream house, however, will that dream turn into a nightmare once obscure things start happening in that

Comments

[kamo_comon]

"Yoochun had to be pried away from the piano." (I had a funny mental image of that.)

At first, I was like, Poppy~ It's starting to sound more like a comedy series! XDDDD But the ending made me go (O___O)!!! Awesome~ I stopped breathing for a moment while reading the last paragraph. The way Junsu felt is the way I feel when I get sleep paralysis~ I UNDERSTAND YOU, SUSU! lol j/k

But OoOoOoOoOh~ I can't to see what happens next! teehee~ YooSu. *gets bricked* Fine.

Oh. I could also imagine the scene of the girl coming out of the bushes and Ho going upstairs to grab the doll and the girl disappearing! \(*0*)/ I think I've watched waaaaay too many horror movies if I can see the entire setting. lmao; oh well~ Great descriptions, Poppy! :Db

God knows how many times I've told you already, /you don't need to write me a fic if you're too busy/!!!!!!!!! XDDDD

Um um um um um... Korean names? HyeMi... OkBin... JiHye... (=___=) I don't know many Korean names. Maybe you can use one of the f(x) members. hehehe; like Sulli! 8D She can be the baaaad revengeful ghost. And she's pretty, too!

You are SO incredibly good since you can just write this on the spot without making any mistakes! (O___O) I swear, even the most talented of writers aren't really consistent with their grammar! I didn't find any mistakes in this chapter except for one where Yunho met the little girl.

"He broke into a smile and tried to approach the girl, but the later just stepped back; small hands clutching at the skirt of her dress tightly."

I think you might mean "latter" instead of "later." ^^

[kamo_comon]

P.S. New layout~~~~ ♥

[poppy_sky]

♥

I got sick of the old one and at first I wanted a dark one "to fit the setting" of my only chaptered fic. But I can't handle reading my f-page in black so ....GIRLY LAYOUT! 8D

[poppy_sky]

Wow long comment~

Yeah, I got that feeling too, "this is not supposed to be funny!! *smacks self*" so I tried to make it more serious from then on.

Omfg, that's horrible ;_; Ihope you haven't been having sleep paralysis lately...

Maybe I'll keep hinting YooSu ehehehe, who knows?

I thought about using a girl from Kpop but damn Sulli would fit the part so well....
I'll see what I do, thanks ^^

I'm not busy, I'm blocked :(

*blushes* I really do think a lot about it, and usually I have a dictionary open in a tab LOL (and many sentences get written like 2384290 times before I like them) ...but like I said, that's "usually". Thanks for spotting my mistake! *edits*

;') you got first spot didn't you?