After the Storm

[poppetawoppet]

Title: After the Storm
Rating: PG-13/R mostly for thematic content
Word Count: approx. 26000 officially the longest thing I have ever written.
Summary: ummm superpowers +internment camps +kradam I guess sums it up
Warnings/Author’s note (and it’s wordy): This is AU. Mostly. I do not own any of the characters, even the fake ones. Inspired partially by

Comments

[adammlambert3]

Great chapter!

[mitaretai]

Haha. I'm gonna be weird and write my thoughts as I read this.

"Adam knew it was that bad, had heard Kris silently crying in the night." - I think you sort of misused the word 'silently' here.

"Adam admitted this was a shitty time to finally admit it was more than a crush, that maybe it was the perfect time." - This sentence doesn't really make sense. Maybe 'but maybe it was the perfect time'?

LOL I actually gasped out loud when I read that Adam had to shave his head. HOW FUCKING HORRIBLE.

"Dam sat on the steps" - I think you mean Adam here xD

"If he could talk to them, at about the others?" - looks like you need to proof read a little better. Not a big deal, it just distracts from the story, you know

[poppetawoppet]

no no thank you for catching that: I read over this like a billion times before posting, but I always seem to miss stuff so thanks. ummm it gets better eventually.

[wmelon_kaiye]

OMG
IT'S LIKE AMERICAN IDOL AND SUPERNATURAL.
I am extremely intringued by your story. I love AUs and this seems like just the sort of thing I'd like.
Look forward to reading the rest of the story, need to sleep now though.
&hearts

[capnzebbie]

This is really a great story so far! I love the premise--very cool and interesting. :)

[_sapphiredreams]

Oh my God. This story is making me so depressed. Good writing though. And I really can't wait to read the end. But man, depressing! I keep having to take breaks. Wow. I'm an x-men fan so I think that this is hitting me harder. Great writing though.