Home Game: A Place That Cannot Be

[poppetawoppet]

I have served my masters well, both good and bad. I have never gone against their word, never said anything except "Yes, My Lord," and "Yes My Lady," no matter what the demand.

That is how I knew about the room that is not there.

Comments

[gildedage]

I like the retelling, especially that this Cinderella had a fairy godfather! Aw!

[poppetawoppet]

aww thanks. I, uh, decided to change the ending though. Just a little.

[gildedage]

Yeah you did! I still like the angle. Why did you change it?

[poppetawoppet]

well I was going to give it an unhappy ending, but Ella wouldn't coorperate. But I just wanted to give it a little more flair I guess.

[comedychick]

Aww, what an interesting new perspective on the Cinderella story :)

[poppetawoppet]

thank you!

[sharya]

I adored this entry! And of course I'm a huge Cinderella fan :P

[poppetawoppet]

:D thank you!

[plastrickland23]

Great retelling! I enjoyed this so much. P.

[poppetawoppet]

:D

[joeymichaels]

Fantastic change of point of view from the original story. I love the gender swap and hope he got to move in with Ella and the Prince for being such a cool dude!

[poppetawoppet]

I'm saving that for the direct to DVD sequel though.

(One of my favorite writing exercises ever in creative writing class was rewrite the Cinderella story. My favorite was from the perspective of her bedroom door-and no it wasn't kinky)