Refreshing

[poppetawoppet]

Comments

[rayaso]

I really loved this! I enjoyed the setting (high school) and the darkness.

[poppetawoppet]

thank you

[tijuanagringo]

Oh my. Creepy delicious. So elegant and yet so brutal. Sweet brutality.

[poppetawoppet]

yay thank you!

[anyonesghost]

Creepy and fun. Nicely done. :-)

[poppetawoppet]

thank you

[halfshellvenus]

Hah! I was tellin rayaso that he should use "ovary punch" in this really literal sense, but he didn't go for it.

I was envisioning crack, but I liked how you handled it here-- dark, stylistic, and doomed all the way through.

we drink punch solemnly and promise one day we'll eat them, sashes and all.
Oh, the bitter humor in this.

Excellent use of the prompt!

[poppetawoppet]

haha at first I was worried I wouldn't be the first to think of it, so I tired to get it up pretty quickly. Then I worried that people might be concerned about me. Turns out I'm not the only one who took it literally! Thanks so much!

[tonithegreat]

Whoa, freaky-deeky! But in such a nicely paced way. There's always a weak link. The chain of two was too many.

[poppetawoppet]

Yay thank you