Pretty Thing You Made Desert You

Nov 09, 2005 16:49

"That I pass out, forget your face, by the time I wake up ( Read more... )

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we_were_walking November 9 2005, 17:38:35 UTC
Jill........ it's like feeling every good part of summer erupt out of a donut with brown sprinkles and all the frosting out of her purse. What do you suppose we'll do?

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VERDI the_cabinets November 9 2005, 17:41:42 UTC
your mind power is growing...that's what happened to my mind, it grew till I could compose quartetts in my head...but the poem was good, I liked it for it gave me a mental image and that is a good sign my friend...

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