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tahariel March 18 2012, 09:34:45 UTC
Oh, this is lovely - you have such a wonderful way of writing Lorna, she's utterly adorable and the way you have her interacting with both Charles and Erik is a delight to read. Charles and Erik's dynamic is really developing, too - I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it :)

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poor_medea March 18 2012, 20:55:36 UTC
Thank you! It's quite hard to write a baby, actually, although I'm just basing everything she does on my own 18 month old daughter.

I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story!

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telperion_15 March 18 2012, 12:36:08 UTC
This is just wonderful, all the relationship dynamics are devloping so brilliantly! :)

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poor_medea March 18 2012, 20:55:52 UTC
Thank you!

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poor_medea March 18 2012, 20:56:38 UTC
Yes, Erik ends up with a hard life no matter what universe he's in. I guess we all just think that's part of his character.

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for commenting!

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taraxacumoff March 18 2012, 13:25:28 UTC
Charles feels inexplicably proud of his ability to keep a toddler alive, clean and hydrated for two hours.

Excellent!!

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poor_medea March 20 2012, 14:26:33 UTC
Haha, thanks!

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tanndell March 18 2012, 21:49:23 UTC
All I want is a chapter where Erik gets sick and Charles has to handle both Erik and Lorna! Please? Pretty please? Also umm... Loving this fic so hard, I cannot even. Your characterization is amazing!

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poor_medea March 20 2012, 14:27:16 UTC
Aw, that does sounds cute. Unfortunately I've got the story pretty much planned out at this point...but we'll see what happens.

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

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