Writer Check In # 1

Sep 01, 2012 16:14

This is writer check in #1! Welcome ( Read more... )

round 4, check in post

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opheliahyde September 1 2012, 21:36:53 UTC
Username: opheliahyde
Fandom: A Song Of Ice And Fire/Game Of Thrones
Current Word Count: 3,732
I feel ______ about my story: in love with the concept/excruciatingly anxious putting it down in words
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She’s lost bits of herself along the way, scattered behind her like breadcrumbs and Jeyne can’t recall that girl anymore, who she was before, but she thinks about her sometimes, like now when she can’t escape her.

This is not where we were supposed to end up, this isn’t--, she hears her in her head and she can almost see her bite her lip, worry lining her familiar features, like looking into a mirror, this girl who’s face was hers--but it’s not her, not anymore; Jeyne doesn’t think that’s her stomach that churns at the memory of Robb’s mouth meeting Jon’s over her shoulder, their hands skimming over each other in ways she only imagined, at the way Robb’s hand looked curled around Jon’s cock--visceral and raw and real.

Don’t be such a child, Jeyne tells her, and wishes she could kill her with hands around her own throat, then moun her as ( ... )

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unavoidedcrisis September 1 2012, 21:38:52 UTC
Marry me, this is amazing. Except I read "real" at the end of paragraph 2 there as "eel". dnw.

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opheliahyde September 1 2012, 21:42:52 UTC
It's a modern apocalypse AU--meaning it's super scary. But I am glad you like it (even though your brain self-edited DNW words in there).

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unavoidedcrisis September 1 2012, 21:46:08 UTC
Scary? *hides under the couch*

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opheliahyde September 1 2012, 21:47:52 UTC
Not zombies scary, but everyone disappeared/no people left in the world scary.

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lavendergaia September 1 2012, 21:59:19 UTC
visceral and raw and eel

I think we just found the next new kink meme favorite. Move over, knotting.

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opheliahyde September 1 2012, 22:03:41 UTC
But wouldn't that just be an off-set of tentacle porn?

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unavoidedcrisis September 1 2012, 22:05:30 UTC
FIVE HUNDRED POINTS FOR WHOEVER WRITES TENTACLE ANYTHING IN THEIR POLY BANG.

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lavendergaia September 1 2012, 22:05:42 UTC
But cooler.

Also, Leen says go on AIM so we can chat about my failings as a writer and a person.

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unavoidedcrisis September 1 2012, 22:06:23 UTC
Yeah, those were basically my exact words.

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