Writer Check In # 1

Sep 01, 2012 16:14

This is writer check in #1! Welcome ( Read more... )

round 4, check in post

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mistyzeo September 1 2012, 20:23:04 UTC
Username: mistyzeo
Fandom: CW RPF
Current Word Count: 5,671
I feel ______ about my story: Naïvely optimistic.
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"We need to talk about Jared," Danneel said.

"Yeah." Still, knowing what they'd worked out right here didn't make the conversation that much easier.

"Give me your thoughts." Danneel was leaning forward a little, holding her cup in both hands. She was a little nervous, he could tell. They both were. This was okay.

"I really like him," Jensen admitted.

"You haven't hooked up with anyone else at Misha's parties- or anywhere, for that matter- since you guys hit it off." Danneel turned her mug so the handle was away from her and took a sip. Her eyes didn't leave Jensen's.

"I haven't wanted to," he said. "I just want him. And you."

She smiled, visibly reassured.

"Look," he said, his heart like a bird in his throat, "I know we said we weren't going to date anyone outside you and me, and that's worked so far, but I'm not sure I want to only hook-up with Jared."

"You want to date him."

"I think so." He shrugged, trying to make it not a big deal. "I think I do."

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unavoidedcrisis September 1 2012, 20:24:44 UTC
See, people look at me strangely when that's the way I drink out of mugs. FICTIONAL DANNEEL HARRIS DOES IT, I'M CLEARLY JUST COOLER THAN Y'ALL.

This looks good, and you have a kick-butt word count to be proud of. Gold star check-in.

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l_niania September 1 2012, 22:15:09 UTC
Ha I do it too! The mug thing I mean... :D

Love the snippet! Can't wait to read if Danneel is always this laid back about Jensen dating someone else.

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mistyzeo September 2 2012, 03:13:16 UTC
Well she's drinking coffee in the scene, so....

Although I do drink from mugs on a regular basis. Also mason jars now that I live on a farm and am a gigantic hipster.

\o/

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mistyzeo September 2 2012, 03:13:46 UTC
She is! I haven't gotten her part of the story together yet, because I'm more of a J2 kind of writer, but I'd like to do her justice.

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tebtosca September 1 2012, 22:29:20 UTC
I don't even want to write. I just want to sit here and wait until yours is done lol!

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unavoidedcrisis September 1 2012, 22:31:22 UTC
OR

OR!

You could write too! \o/

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tebtosca September 1 2012, 22:33:35 UTC
But I'm having such a good time sitting here waiting while sipping my Diet Dr. Pepper and staring at my blank word doc \o/

...okay, OKAY, I'm going to go focus on orgies or something

*salutes*

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unavoidedcrisis September 1 2012, 22:34:18 UTC
I'm glad you were so easily convinced :D

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mistyzeo September 2 2012, 03:19:32 UTC
XD No, you have to write too!

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tebtosca September 3 2012, 20:42:42 UTC
so....your fic isn't set in the actual 70s, right? LOL! :P

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mistyzeo September 3 2012, 20:55:45 UTC
i.e. swinger temporal central? No, it's set ambiguously in the aught tens. :P

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tebtosca September 3 2012, 20:59:35 UTC
LOL, okay good haha. I think I've settled on a porn-filled suburban farce set in the swinging 70s complete with feathered hair and key parties and a neighborhood full of kinky people :D

....or something. DON'T JUDGE ME FOR HAVING NO PLOT.

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mistyzeo September 3 2012, 21:01:39 UTC
AGH GOD IT SOUNDS PERFECT. I'm so into it. I'm wondering about the flimsy plot of mine and whether the fic even needs it. MOAR GROUP SEX.

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tebtosca September 3 2012, 21:10:54 UTC
I think we should come to the conclusion that plot is pointless, and group sex is necessary.

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