This Tornado Loves You, Chapter 4-A Short Caskett WIP, Set June 2013

[pollylynn]

Title: This Tornado Loves You, Chapter 4

WC: ~2000 this chapter, 8300 total

Summary: "He turns back to the doors, watching eagerly as a new tide of passengers comes and goes. She sees more than one jaded rider turn away to hide a small smile. Like it's impossible not to catch it from him. This fizzing enthusiasm for the moment. For the day. For life

Comments

[icarus_abides]

Since the fifth chapter holds the promise of smutty times, I'm pretty sure no one's going to hold it against you ;)

[pollylynn]

Unless they stage a riot over delayed smutty times . . .

But I like your optimistic outlook better!

[anonymous]

I haven't even finished this chapter yet, but I already have to tell you that this is my favorite, favorite, favorite fluffy Castle fic EVER. It has BASEBALL, and their families getting along, and summer, and I LOVE EVERY SINGLE THING ABOUT EVERY WORD. The dialogue is snappy and in character. The descriptions of that stadium are realistic. The knish scene KILLED ME. Their intra- and inter-family relationships hit the perfect note. I have such a huge smile on my face. Thank you so much for writing this. From a girl who went to many, many baseball games with my dad and my extended family, thank you.

[pollylynn]

Thank you SO much, anon! Really very kind and useful for me to know what appeals

Really, really appreciate this!