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Feb 08, 2009 09:02

Title: Underbelly [Part I]
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Pairing: Xanxus/Squalo
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Spoilers through the Rings arc, sex, language, ninja-like Yama/Squalo and Dino/Squalo which sneak in on occasion (but you expected that part, yes?).
Word Count: 9 drabbles at 100 words each.[For centi_porn]
Notes: THIS IS ME FINSIHING SOMETHING AND MOVING ( Read more... )

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myrafur February 8 2009, 14:54:51 UTC
I have to wonder if you type angrily when you write Xanxus, and maybe even Squalo. Do you smash the keys with your fingertips? Because it reads clean and real; sharp and right.

In other words: Yesssssssssss, this was awesome.

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pollinia February 8 2009, 15:09:04 UTC
Do you smash the keys with your fingertips?

This is how I write all of my fic, actually. The whole "monkey with typewriters" theory,you know? XD

But thank yooouuuu. I may or may not have a bit of RAWR! built up at the moment. ♥

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evocates February 8 2009, 15:18:14 UTC
mmmmm baby I love your prose. It's so harsh, so raw and so utterly them. It's all about pride and violence and it's so pure that it's really amazing. I love how you characterised them here - how both of them are prideful and yet refuse to compromise or show weaknesses. Their dynamics are awesome.

And the Yamamoto cameos make me laugh because it's so you, bb.

/HUGS Beautiful as always. ♥♥♥

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pollinia February 9 2009, 13:53:56 UTC
Baby, you are too kind. I love the pride and the violence in this pairing. It's not about Squalo LIKING the cruelty; it's about him putting up with it like a kid ignores a scraped knee because he's more interested in other things about Squalo. It's an oddly sincere relationship, I think. =/

Hee. There is no Squalo without a Yamamoto in my fangirl universe. Even if he'd never pick Yamamoto over Xanxus, the dumb kid is still a part of his world. XD

You're sweet. Thank you.

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questofdreams February 8 2009, 19:22:51 UTC
#3 ;__; YAMAMOTOOO *HUGGLES*

#5 YOU ARE KILLING ME HERE ALKSJFISEJSKE HOW IS IT THAT THIS IS SO INSANELY HOT AND YET ALL I CAN THINK ABOUT IS CUDDLING YAMAMOTO?! >_>;;;

#8 O-HOHO ♥__♥

#10-00 aksjfiselkseie there is nothing better to clear the sinuses XD and the word blocks than reading your prose *___*

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pollinia February 9 2009, 13:57:50 UTC
I have so much fun making Yamamoto sad in my fic. There's got to be something wrong with me. XD

Thank yooouuu~! I've had this thing sitting half-finished on my hard drive for ages, and it was fun to finally attack it and wrangle it into place. I'm so happy you liked it. <333

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frostheavens February 8 2009, 19:28:47 UTC
The last one is my absolute favourite. Boys being boys is just so good to read. As much as I adore S80, all your doing, you can't deny Squalo's forever loyalty to his boss. I think it overpowers everything else even his fetish for underage mafia boys

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pollinia February 9 2009, 14:05:54 UTC
Thank you! The last one on there is actually the first one that I wrote for this, way back in the fall, and I never quite got around to finishing it.

Oh man, S80 is so hot and wonderful, but it would be a total fling. Squalo is completely devoted to Xanxus, and even if it isn't more than just a leader-follower thing, he'd still ditch Yamamoto in an instant if Xanxus snapped his fingers. WHICH IS HOT TO ME DO NOT JUDGE. XD

I'm so happy you liked this. *pets*

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proboscus February 9 2009, 03:22:44 UTC
OMG X/S WRITTEN BY YOU CRAIS
OFF TO READ NOW.

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proboscus February 9 2009, 03:28:03 UTC
Squalo's voice, a slick wet underbelly, enough teeth to fill the mouths of an ocean full of sharks.

All throughout reading this, I made a sound not unlike a pitiful whiiimper. SO GOOD. SO THEM. ;; THESE DRABBLES MADE ME WIBBLE. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THEM. THANK YOU.

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pollinia February 9 2009, 15:01:05 UTC
THANK YOOOUUU~! So glad you liked this. These guys have my heart so hard right now. I feel like I'm sort of regaining my writing voice after it, like, decided to go on a road trip or something, so it was fun to play with some different characters. :)

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