Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

[polgarawolf]

Thirtieth part of a WIP
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Fairly PG-13ish now, but inevitably at least an R (?)
Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely boys from Star Wars, more's the pity! What I do have is an extremely contrary muse that refuses to shut up and leave me alone

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[polgarawolf]

*Grins* I am only daunted (and usually only mildly) whenever I stop to think about how many revisions I've done and how many I think I'll probably still have to do and how much more of the story I think there still is to write before it'll really be done. Well, not done, done, because more and more I'm getting the feeling that this is going to be more than one story's worth of stuff, but done enough to come to a stop and not be completely in the midst of things (like it is right now). Thanks so much for responding as much as you have and for saying you'll look at it again! I really need to break down and beg for a beta, but I've never had one before and my response time tends to be weird because my internet time is always more limited than I'd like it to be, so I've no idea how to go about finding one and I'm sort of halfway afraid of running anyone who agreed to be my beta off with my general scatty-ness, if that makes sense . . . Trying to edit and write just from a few scattered responses is harder than I would've expected it to be. I'm used to getting feedback in my creative writing classes and I guess I'm spoiled, even though it's been a couple of years since my last class. *Sighs* Anyway, thanks again!!! You're officially my hero, this month!