[Fic] My First Pages (yunjae ver.)

[pokky4ever]

Title: My first Pages 
Author: Pokky  
Lenght: One-shot
Rating: NC-17 
Warning: Smut.
Pairing: Yunjae, one-sided  ChangminXJaejoong
Summary: "This was when my nightmare began, but instead, I called it my Fairytale..."

Notes: In this fic, Yunho is a rocker who plays guitar, dyes his hair and has a piercing somewhere on his face xD

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My First Pages

Comments

[miya_c]

Omg omo! this was great!!.. i love it! (:

Only a little mistake..
"He wanted to ask his friend what was wrong, but when Yunho hesitantly moved his head towards him and slowly closed his eyelids, Uruha finally understood." ..in here i think it should be Jaejoong not Uruha!

but this was beautiful and yes that role fits min!

[pokky4ever]

Thank you really much for pointing out my little mistake... Dx... I was distracted yet again... but thank you!!! ^-^..*sorry ;_;*

hehe.. glad you think that role fits changmin.. I was afraid of people actually hating it..

Thank you for reading and for the comment!

[chai_tea88]

this was pretty good. but i would have enjoyed it more if you didn`t relegate changmin to such a mean role to advance the yunjae. on the contrary i don`t think mean roles suit him at all, so the characterization for changmin here is OOC for me.

[pokky4ever]

Thank you for being honest about changmin's role in this story, I really appreciate this.. (in all truth, I didn't know who to pick for the evil role, but I've read fics where changmin was, and I guess I wanted to try..)

Thanks for reading and for the comment!

[freepureangel]

O:
EMOTIONAL.
BUT THEY GOT HAPPY ENDING SO NOW I HAPPY TOO.
*giggles*

[pokky4ever]

hehe.... there is a sequel, but I don't think you'd be happy after reading it.... ^^;

but thanks for reading and for the comment!

[holystardown]

gah ;-; minnie nooooooo! *shoots* lol
as much as i dislike min being the bad guy i absolutely loved all of this <3 the yunjae was just so sweet ^^
PeAcE

[pokky4ever]

lol xD yeah, changmin isn't really nice in this fic...

Thanks for reading and for the comment!

[ara_niey]

oh wow~
love the smut!*grins*

did they run away together?
what happened to jae's dad and min then?

[pokky4ever]

there's a sequel to this fic... xD I'll let you know about this! (we find out what happens to everyone of them!)

Thanks for reading and for the comment!