{doujinshi} "Untold" (KHR, 5927, PG)
I still don't get how it always takes me a long time to type my posts, but If you guys are wondering where the heck I am yesterday when I promised I'd be here, then let me tell you this: Never, EVER, do community service during Halloween. I'm serious. *cries*
But enough of that. Here is the 5927 doujinshi that I've been whining talking about in the past few days. Hope you, uhm, enjoy. ^^;; And if you guys could help me with the title, that would be really awesome of you. *gets shot*
Series: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Pairing: Gokudera/Tsuna (5927)
Rating: PG
Warning: Future arc!spoilers at the end. Death. Angst. Sort of.
Dedication: To the lovely dual_avi, who had no idea how she made my entire month with our long KHR/5927 talk. It was so much fun, and I simply can't thank you enough for encouraging me/helping me on some parts I'm struggling with the doujinshi! And to amecandy because if it isn't for her encouragement, I wouldn't have probably bothered to finish this doujinshi in the first place. Sorry if it took me a while to finish this, but thank you very much!
Suggested BGM: Echo Again by SPLAY
Preview:
NOTES: I really don't know what I should feel about this doujinshi. I'm really happy that I was able to finish it, but I really can't say I'm proud of it. I guess it's because the "ending" is what really inspired me to start on this doujinshi that I had trouble working on the "leading" scenes, if you could call 'em like that. Doesn't make any sense. And the pacing is a bit fast paced, IMO. Ahhh.... *fails at doing doujinshi*
And OLD ART IS OLLLLLLLLD. Haha, looking at this again makes me laugh because...dude. This is, like, my first KHR fanwork ever. I just failed at finishing it before that 5927 fanart, that's all. XD;; And then I picked it up again after amecandy's encouragement. I decided to redraw some of the panels before school started, which is why the style might be a bit inconsistent in some parts, but heh. I still suck at drawing Gokudera and Tsuna. XD;; And how Tsuna keeps looking like Sora in every page still annoys the hell out of me.
So I sort of changed the setting a bit: It was originally meant to be set on TYL all throughout, but since I drew them like kids in here, it now takes place right after Tsuna becomes the boss. But the last two pages are set in TYL because haha, I didn't have to worry about drawing Gokudera's face. XD;;
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"You don't have to touch someone to love them, It's not in the kiss - it's in the times you don't kiss." - Anonymous
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"I love you not only for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you. I love you not only for what you have made of yourself, but for what you are making of me. I love you for the part of me that you bring out." - Elizabeth Barrett Browning
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COMMENTS:
P1 - This one...is really weird, I know. I don't have any idea how to make this part any better - if you saw my early draft for this page, you'll be surprised at how much MORE it doesn't make sense. At all. And, uh, the reason why I decided to put Tsuna in that outfit is because I'm so bad at drawing his hair at that time (and still does, actually) that I had to cover something up on his head. ^^;; *lame reasoning*
P8 - Damn. I wish I could make this scene a bit longer, because it certainly ended up looking like a one big filler or something. -_-;; But I want to thank dual_avi for helping me out on the "what would Gokudera call Tsuna" thing! =D
P10-11 - If all the other pages looked rushed/crap, then I'll say I love these two pages a lot. I wish I could properly express the feelings I want in there (because I know I failed at it), but...yeah. dual_avi helped me out on what kind of flower Gokudera might give to Tsuna using this list, and I was sort of debating whether to use pink carnation or forget-me-nots. I ended up drawing the carnation, anyway, because I know I failed to show the, uhm, 5927 love in here. *nervous laugh*
And I really had no idea what to write in page 11. I don't know if putting "thank you" fits the scene or if I should just have left that page without the dialogue at all... *ponders this*
FINALLY. IT'S DONE. But I don't think I could do the things I want to do today, after all... *looks at Faulkner's Light in August, then cries*
Hopefully, I could finally catch up tomorrow. Hope you guys are having a nice day! *hugs everyone*
EDIT: You guys... ;______; *is touched*