Re: [Gen I] Ils chanteront nos chansons (Eevee+Green)chrysaSeptember 18 2011, 02:53:18 UTC
Hi!
Thanks for your comment. I wanted to wait until the author reveal to reply so I hope you don't mind.
Haha, oops, re: IVs vs. EVs. The irony was that I was actually camped out at Bulbapedia trying to figure out a nature for Eevee, but I missed something very basic. ^^; I spent the summer stuffing my head with science so I could take my MCATs and it basically wiped out my memory of everything else. /sigh
To point two: The problem with the monotone, I think, was the fact that I basically had to strip the fic away of all formatting to get it to fit (including "" marks ;.;). I wrote the story in Word and kept a careful eye on the character count, but Word didn't count the paragraph breaks as characters on top of lark's imposed x00 wc rule, I was basically at a loss of what to do. This pretty much goes to show the importance of breaks in telling a story and pacing. I reposted it with the correct formatting, so hopefully that solves the issue -- if you care enough to reread it and it's not, please clarify and I'll try to fix it.
Thanks for your comment. I wanted to wait until the author reveal to reply so I hope you don't mind.
Haha, oops, re: IVs vs. EVs. The irony was that I was actually camped out at Bulbapedia trying to figure out a nature for Eevee, but I missed something very basic. ^^; I spent the summer stuffing my head with science so I could take my MCATs and it basically wiped out my memory of everything else. /sigh
To point two: The problem with the monotone, I think, was the fact that I basically had to strip the fic away of all formatting to get it to fit (including "" marks ;.;). I wrote the story in Word and kept a careful eye on the character count, but Word didn't count the paragraph breaks as characters on top of lark's imposed x00 wc rule, I was basically at a loss of what to do. This pretty much goes to show the importance of breaks in telling a story and pacing. I reposted it with the correct formatting, so hopefully that solves the issue -- if you care enough to reread it and it's not, please clarify and I'll try to fix it.
Thanks for the lovely and thoughtful review :)
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