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Title: I Go On
Author: Blackjack
Rating: All
Verse: Animeverse
Characters: Cyrus
Summary: After the portal closed, what happened?
( To them, from that world, my story ended on that day. )
Author: Blackjack
Rating: All
Verse: Animeverse
Characters: Cyrus
Summary: After the portal closed, what happened?
( To them, from that world, my story ended on that day. )
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I love this to pieces. Cyrus is not my favorite guy and yet the way you wrote him here, the one-line thoughts - it's awesome. I had chills, moreso than when I played the game and he just disappeared. Randomly, I like all the triple descriptions.
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That part was creepy, but the disappearing...eh, they did it with other characters. It was just a sort of a "he's leaving, no need to show it" thing. But yes that whole scene was creepy overall, especially his last rant to you about "joy that shines the brightest" and how he won't give up. He can't hold himself together mentally any more and then takes off for parts unknown. Very creepy and very sad.
But at least there he exists *somewhere*. On the show...I was sitting there with my jaw hanging open. I just could not believe that they did that.
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