IF PERFECTION HAD A FIC FORM THIS WOULD BE IT i cannot reiterate my love for this simply because there are no words. none. they don't exist. this is everything i've ever wanted in a romantic eunhae fic i didn't even know i wanted. i've always loved how you don't write them as stereotypes or bad fandom jokes that just don't know when to die but you make them real, and here you just take it to a whole different level. i loved hyukjae and how he was soooo hyukjae, vulnerable and shy but still confident and sometimes cocky but such a sweetie (and a total kinky bastard) and donghae. DONGHAE. i love their banter and their sexual innuendos and how comfortable they are around each other but still obviously nervous because they want to bang each otherlike each other. it just felt like two people growing to like each other on both an emotional and physical level without the constraint of "ugh dudes don't have feelings" or ohhh one of them is obviously a girl and it was perfect ;;;;
i have to proclaim my love for the kyuhyuk bffry, each one of kyu's lines was golden and i loved his genuine interest/worry for hyukjae's happiness and he was such a great friend in his own weird kyu-ish way.
now the most important part of my comment
THE BOOKSHELF SEX. THE BOOKSHELF S E X. holy shit. you've always written amazing porn but this was KAjKDFJDFKJFJFAFKJ;LDSFJLDF;LDFL;DSFK;LSKF;LKAKJSDDSGL sexy and hot as fuck but i love how real it felt bc yeah hyukjae weighs nothing but you try holding that up against a rack of books with your dick inside and try not getting tired. so yay for realistic feeling sex and ughhhh the buildup and how hyukjae just wants to get to it damn it (which makes sense later when he and donghae have the confortation about guys who want to just fuck and leave ;;;;;) but donghae wants to take things slow and lets hyukjae know there's no rush. and the MASSAGE SEX AND HYUKJAE NOT WANTING TO DO ANY OF THE WORK so fucking hot and ugh he's a kinky bastard isn't he? but i love donghae being surprised thinking he would want to top but hyukjae wants so obviously to be pampered and taken care of in every sense of the word (and also he's kind of a selfish bastard but it's cute so that's okay)
and also HONEYDEW THE MOOSE. THE WHOLE MOOSE SCENE. WHY SO CUTE ;;;;;;;;;
i have so much more to say it's ridiculous because i especially loved the dialogue! it was so witty and clever but it came off as real with a good flow and so many golden sentences i would quote them but then i'd have to quote them all. ugh i sound like a crazy person but i can't help it this is what you've reduced my puny mind to and in the sequel in my mind rn they live happily ever after and they move in together and donghae finally writes that book which hyukjae designs the cover for and they get a big fluffy dog named cantaloupe and read books to their six kids in bed with hot chocolate every single night (when they're not sneaking off to have hot library sex that is)
pretty sure this is the longest comment i've ever left on any fic ever and it's nothing but my rambling feelings so i will stop before i completely embarrass myself. which is impossible so okay bai have my soul please.
omg i felt so dumb after because what was that entire comment like the worst word vomit of fic feels in the history of history and i used the word real way too much but after tee's fic and then yours it was like two really awesome fics after months of nada and my brain malfunctioned and short circuited o_o
and hearts are better than trophys take that aleisha!!!!!
honeydew will become cantaloupe's cuddle buddy and hyukjae will get jealous but he'll have donghae so it will be okay
DANIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IF PERFECTION HAD A FIC FORM THIS WOULD BE IT i cannot reiterate my love for this simply because there are no words. none. they don't exist. this is everything i've ever wanted in a romantic eunhae fic i didn't even know i wanted. i've always loved how you don't write them as stereotypes or bad fandom jokes that just don't know when to die but you make them real, and here you just take it to a whole different level. i loved hyukjae and how he was soooo hyukjae, vulnerable and shy but still confident and sometimes cocky but such a sweetie (and a total kinky bastard) and donghae. DONGHAE. i love their banter and their sexual innuendos and how comfortable they are around each other but still obviously nervous because they want to bang each otherlike each other. it just felt like two people growing to like each other on both an emotional and physical level without the constraint of "ugh dudes don't have feelings" or ohhh one of them is obviously a girl and it was perfect ;;;;
i have to proclaim my love for the kyuhyuk bffry, each one of kyu's lines was golden and i loved his genuine interest/worry for hyukjae's happiness and he was such a great friend in his own weird kyu-ish way.
now the most important part of my comment
THE BOOKSHELF SEX. THE BOOKSHELF S E X. holy shit. you've always written amazing porn but this was KAjKDFJDFKJFJFAFKJ;LDSFJLDF;LDFL;DSFK;LSKF;LKAKJSDDSGL sexy and hot as fuck but i love how real it felt bc yeah hyukjae weighs nothing but you try holding that up against a rack of books with your dick inside and try not getting tired. so yay for realistic feeling sex and ughhhh the buildup and how hyukjae just wants to get to it damn it (which makes sense later when he and donghae have the confortation about guys who want to just fuck and leave ;;;;;) but donghae wants to take things slow and lets hyukjae know there's no rush. and the MASSAGE SEX AND HYUKJAE NOT WANTING TO DO ANY OF THE WORK so fucking hot and ugh he's a kinky bastard isn't he? but i love donghae being surprised thinking he would want to top but hyukjae wants so obviously to be pampered and taken care of in every sense of the word (and also he's kind of a selfish bastard but it's cute so that's okay)
and also HONEYDEW THE MOOSE. THE WHOLE MOOSE SCENE. WHY SO CUTE ;;;;;;;;;
i have so much more to say it's ridiculous because i especially loved the dialogue! it was so witty and clever but it came off as real with a good flow and so many golden sentences i would quote them but then i'd have to quote them all. ugh i sound like a crazy person but i can't help it this is what you've reduced my puny mind to and in the sequel in my mind rn they live happily ever after and they move in together and donghae finally writes that book which hyukjae designs the cover for and they get a big fluffy dog named cantaloupe and read books to their six kids in bed with hot chocolate every single night (when they're not sneaking off to have hot library sex that is)
pretty sure this is the longest comment i've ever left on any fic ever and it's nothing but my rambling feelings so i will stop before i completely embarrass myself. which is impossible so okay bai have my soul please.
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and omfg CANTALOUPE ;~;
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Also Cantaloupe needs to happen.
Also I should go comment in my own space /goes/
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but yes cantaloupe needs to happen. along with the 6 kids. and kinky library sex.
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and hearts are better than trophys take that aleisha!!!!!
honeydew will become cantaloupe's cuddle buddy and hyukjae will get jealous but he'll have donghae so it will be okay
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