Fic: The Only Face You See (Max/Louie)

Jan 31, 2008 22:21

Title: The Only Face You See
Fandom: Disney (Max/Louie)
Summary: The only time Louie doesn't like being a triplet is when he's around Max.
Notes: This is entirely harmonyangel's fault, as she came up with the scenario but refused to write it. I'll get her yet! Obscure character references: Melody and her sister Millie are Minnie's nieces. Apparently in the ( Read more... )

disney: classic characters, disney, writing

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mizzmarvel February 1 2008, 04:17:22 UTC
Um, okay, so this fic was totally, totally cute, and Max/Louie is wonderful and so is causing harm to Mortie and Ferdie. But this:

Uncle Donald had been able to tell them apart basically from hatching onwards

is what killed me. DONALD IS YOUR DADDY, BOYS.

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poisonivory February 3 2008, 19:13:25 UTC
Donald has never been fooled by switching shenanigans! Luckily for the boys he is fooled by every other kind of shenanigans.

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gg_83 February 1 2008, 04:56:43 UTC
Oh man, the whole thing was great, but this line:

Louie’s heart gave the most cautious, prudent of leaps.

was fantastic.

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poisonivory February 3 2008, 19:40:31 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, Louie's not going to get his hopes up too much...but he totally is. *pets him*

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poisonivory February 3 2008, 20:01:29 UTC
Aw, thank you!

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appending_doom February 1 2008, 11:30:28 UTC
Man, that was totally awesome. Immensely cheering.

Great job.

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poisonivory February 3 2008, 20:32:35 UTC
Thank you! I was like "Hmm, it is gray and ucky. Cheerful springtime fic, stat!" (Uh, Arbor Day is in spring, right?)

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appending_doom February 5 2008, 02:17:38 UTC
Yes, last Friday in April.

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eliyes February 1 2008, 12:18:40 UTC
AWESOME! I would point out my favourite bits, but there's a lot of them, and all I have to say about each is "Awesome!" and "awwww", so, take it as a given. :D

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poisonivory February 3 2008, 21:15:44 UTC
Aw, thank you!

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eliyes February 3 2008, 23:48:58 UTC
I even pimped the link to friends over AIM who don't do the LJ thing. :3 With positive murmurings in response (hopefully they weren't just humouring me X3).

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poisonivory February 4 2008, 02:19:37 UTC
*beams* Thank you!

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