Yes, it's Max/Louie fic. DUN JUDGE ME.

Apr 05, 2007 18:44

Title: Not That Terrible
Fandom: Disney (Max/Louie)
Notes: mizzmarvel requested drabbles. I...am not very good at stopping at 100.
Prompt: "The First Date"

In retrospect, it had probably been a bad idea to have the date at the House. )

disney: classic characters, disney, writing

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second_batgirl April 6 2007, 00:45:46 UTC
*judges you*

*finds you AWESOME*

This is adorable. *loves*

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poisonivory April 6 2007, 03:36:04 UTC
Yay! *loves back*

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caiusmajor April 6 2007, 01:50:46 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwww. They are all adorable.

I am sad Uncle Scrooge couldn't make it, though.

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poisonivory April 6 2007, 03:38:11 UTC
Well, the others all work at the House of Mouse, which is why having a date there was such a poor idea. (I'm not sure who was doing Max and Louie's jobs that night, but, uh...*handwaves*) Scrooge will probably finance the second date. And by "date," I clearly mean "trip through time to discover the Lost Gem of Duckopolis" or something.

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eliyes April 16 2007, 19:12:51 UTC
YES, CLEARLY.

WRITE THAT. Please?

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inmyriadbits April 6 2007, 03:16:56 UTC
You know, my first reaction was "AWWW!" And then it was "Damn you, Jess! DISNEY SLASH. SERIOUSLY." But I love you, and I totally laughed out loud at Huey and Dewey's song, and it was very very sweet.

Dammit.

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poisonivory April 6 2007, 03:39:01 UTC
WHATEVER, MAN. DISNEY SLASH IS THE NEW BROYAY.

Okay, I hope not. But still! *g*

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mizzmarvel April 6 2007, 03:23:35 UTC
Max liked Louie a lot, began to consider him a good friend, and believe it or not, that was a bad thing. He had a good time with him, and Louie could be really funny, though not always on purpose, and that was constantly dangerous. The more he hung out with Louie, the more he laughed, and the more he laughed, the more he risked:

“Hyuck!”

He instinctively clapped his hands over his mouth and, mortified, gave Louie a sidelong glance. Louie just looked at him quizzically.

“What?” he asked, confused by why the conversation had come to such an abrupt stop.

Max cautiously removed his fingers one by one, afraid of what else might pop out, if he wasn’t careful. “Sorry,” he said. “The laugh,” and he chuckled weakly, sheepish punctuation to the end of the statement. “It’s so…goofy. I try to keep it under wraps.”

“Oh,” Louie said, clearly still a little puzzled.

“Like - don’t you have anything, a habit or something, that you picked up from Donald? Something you can’t stand?”

“Well, there was the cigar addiction.”

“What?“But we got over ( ... )

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poisonivory April 6 2007, 03:35:12 UTC
Dude. DUDE. Now I am not going to be able to sleep, because I will be too busy remembering this and GIGGLING LIKE A DERANGED PERSON.

CIGAR ADDICTION. Oh man, the bad Disney crack.

I love that Max feels simultaneously comfortable enough with Louie to tell him that he's embarrassed about the laugh, and uncomfortable enough to be embarrassed about it. It's just so...so perfect, because Louie's not this distant goddess like Roxanne but he's also...Max wants to look cool in front of him, and doesn't quite know why yet, and OH BOYS.

And OH LOUIE. It is helpful for shy boys to have a filter! But I am glad he doesn't. *squeezes him*

And oh, oh, Max figuring things OUT, oh my goodness. I just. HYUCK!

Um, yes. I like this.

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lilanglniara April 6 2007, 04:22:52 UTC
aahhhh!!my brain just broke!! slash with disney...oh, da painnnnnn!! * much love! * but very very original, i commend you!

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poisonivory April 7 2007, 18:03:41 UTC
Hee! *patches your brain back up*

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