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I have revised it.. still not complete, but working at it.. let me know if you have any criticisms (good or bad) I think I need help on this one..
~Romeo and Juliet~
They were attached to a world on a shelf
Where everything was malice
Hidden with love, hidden with a palace
They loved each other more than life itself
He boke her heart, she never cryed
They both sold thier soul
They were not the same, that day they died
They weren't ready for the toll
Her face is painted on the mirror
Forever looking at herself, it has got to be rough
Knowing the girl on the other side is forever taunting her, everyday clearer
She thinks she will never be good enough
He pops one, maybe four
Anything to make him synthetic
A smile in vain, a laugh that's pathetic
He pops six, maybe more
She doesn't eat, doesn't drink anymore
When she is forced, she can't keep it down, it's tough
She doesn't see her reflection in the mirror anymore
She knows she will never be good enough
He downs one, maybe four
Anything to make him forget, you see
He drinks as much as he can, an ersatz ecstacy
He downs six, maybe more
She bleeds the tears she cannnot cry out
The sweet smell of life, the color of pleasure
Vivid vermillion tears, her heart drains out
She can never be good enough by any measure
He overdosed by one, maybe four
Anything to live on the verge of her
All he thought of was her
He overdosed by six, mabe more
She wanted him back, he wouldn't hear it again
They damned themseves for eachother's dove
Never to feel the pain again
All in the name of love
~Romeo and Juliet~
They were attached to a world on a shelf
Where everything was malice
Hidden with love, hidden with a palace
They loved each other more than life itself
He boke her heart, she never cryed
They both sold thier soul
They were not the same, that day they died
They weren't ready for the toll
Her face is painted on the mirror
Forever looking at herself, it has got to be rough
Knowing the girl on the other side is forever taunting her, everyday clearer
She thinks she will never be good enough
He pops one, maybe four
Anything to make him synthetic
A smile in vain, a laugh that's pathetic
He pops six, maybe more
She doesn't eat, doesn't drink anymore
When she is forced, she can't keep it down, it's tough
She doesn't see her reflection in the mirror anymore
She knows she will never be good enough
He downs one, maybe four
Anything to make him forget, you see
He drinks as much as he can, an ersatz ecstacy
He downs six, maybe more
She bleeds the tears she cannnot cry out
The sweet smell of life, the color of pleasure
Vivid vermillion tears, her heart drains out
She can never be good enough by any measure
He overdosed by one, maybe four
Anything to live on the verge of her
All he thought of was her
He overdosed by six, mabe more
She wanted him back, he wouldn't hear it again
They damned themseves for eachother's dove
Never to feel the pain again
All in the name of love