Written for
tinderblast's
February Challenge, which was basically about magic & porn in the Wizarding World. As such, warnings for Fleur/Gabrielle incest, snuff films & general porn-type ideas. Though, as with all my fics, it is sadly lacking in the hardcore
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Parfait: both perfect, and many layers of sweetness, some poisonously beautiful and others merely heart-stopping.
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And. *dies at your icon* <3333333.
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You're welcome!
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You have a gift for weaving such painfully delicate images, such sweetly poisonous things, that the reader is left shivering and unable to breathe.
Examples:
'... grass growing over her body in tender green tendrils...'
'... noiseless summer blue...'
'... a white fracture in the sky...'
The only thing that held me up, ironically, was: 'In a world of illusion some things must be real.' I stopped and stared at that for a few minutes--really, P, you should know better than to go all existential on me in fics!--and with statements like that I just want to go off somewhere and ponder for a long time. Luckily, Fleur's red mouth and the warmth of her pulse kept me reading. (Philosophy proposes, beauty disposes.)
And the silent intensity of what these sisters share--the addiction to death, to dying, to illusion, to each other, and the flawless but nonetheless marked transition from the smooth, almost smoky ( ... )
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*writhes in guilt*
I'll... try to review properly one day, I promise. But I'm just... I can't handle it right now. Especially not after having a similar nightmare a few nights ago. Aargh.
... That's a compliment, by the way. Few stories can actually scare me. Yours did.
*shivers and backs away from all the bones*
Oh, and--you seem not to have noticed this, but I wrote a strange Parvati/Padma fic a while ago, and dedicated it to you, Berne and Sinope. Er. I hope you don't mind having something so awful dedicated to you... I'm still fixing it up, if that's any consolation.
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And. OMG. Thanks for pointing it out. Have been terrible about reading the flist of late, but that should change thanks to the wonder of filters. *goes off to read*
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Squee. Delacours. Squee. Silk rope. Squee. L'arc de Triomphe. Sorry about being so terrible and incoherent, but you could fill an ocean with all the squee in this fic. Really. Brilliantly written as always; oh goodness, Fleur's image of a perfect death is just... squee.
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*LOVES YOU*
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