Fic: The Colors of Sunday Monday

[floweranza]

Hey, je_holiday fics were revealed! Not that I've been stalking the comm or anything.

Title: The Colors of Sunday Monday
Pairing: Ohno/Nino, PG-13
Summary: The first time Ohno sees the guy he's sitting at the bar at Sunday Monday.
Notes: This was written for je_holiday. :D It seems honooko enjoyed it, for which I'm glad! The original post is here.

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[myjulien]

Nooo, I didn't guess right and I am so bummed! And while going through the list I also realize that there are quite a few pieces I missed reading. :(

"Well, this is great," Nino grumps. "The alcoholic leading the casual drinker home."

Ohno laughs, leaning heavier on Nino and sticking his nose into Nino's neck. There's a hint of frost to the air and it carries away the scent of beer. "You're not an alcoholic," he whispers, letting his breath touch on Nino's ear.

Nino stills. "What am I, then?"

"You were sad," Ohno says, and pats Nino's shoulder when he jerks violently away from Ohno's side at the statement. "But now you're going to be an actor, and then Nino-chan's gonna be... happy..."

Nino's silent for a minute, and then he nods. "Yeah, I'm going to be happy. We're going to my apartment, okay? It's closer."

"Sure," Ohno warbles, and the next thing he knows he's tumbling down ungainly with Nino into a bed, looking into Nino's surprised eyes.I really loved this bit. Their dynamics just crystallize in the moment

[floweranza]

XP! Don't worry, bb. ♥ Man, I procrastinated so hard on this and I feel like it could've been better, but the recipient liked it, so I guess that's the most important.

BUNNY DUMPLINGSSSSS. :DDD Om-nom-nom. But I still wouldn't eat them.

Thanks for reading! ♥~~

[augustfai]

Yay, I guessed right! :) And let me say first of all that I am ecstatic that you wrote about Sunday Monday. And Morning Flash. And Friday Faraways. After I watched that video I NEEDED fic that included those clubs, and now here you are with this wonderful fic, and sdlk;alskd;. Still ridiculously happy, I am.

But besides that, I enjoyed this so much! Everything from Ohno being a choreographer, to Nino showing up at every single bar drinking and Ohno kind of saving him from that, to the smooth and natural way their relationship progresses. And the dancing--unf, the dancing.

♥_____♥, basically!

[floweranza]

!! :D Good job! I thought it gave me away really easily, to be honest. And besides procrastinating to hell on it and having schoolwork that uhm... rightfully distracted me away, it's not a bad fic, I guess. Clubbinnn' worthy. XD

I'm glad you liked it! Mm, dancing. ♥ Somehow, I want to extend that. And Mr. Bunny Dumplings.

Thanks for reading, bb! ♥

[elfiepike]

i really enjoyed this. ♥!

[j_sei]

Uh, from all of this I really like the last sentence. It's just express many things <3
And Sho fails. And Aiba's food <3