Tyrant fanfic: Unspoken Words

[pofika]

Acknowledgement: The characters found in this story are the sole property of Takanaga Hinako. I just hope that she could forgive me what I have done with them if she would know about it. Sorry, Sensei.Title: Unspoken Words
Author: pofika
Warnings: Blood, broken bone, some bad language, mild erotic narration, and if “sentimental” is a warning then

Comments

[lilmiyavi]

I read your story.
It´s an interesting one :)
It´s not my biggest hoppy to read fanfics - to say it more clearly: I really don´t like reading fanfics very much.

But this one was nice :)
You made a few spelling mistakes - but thats not a big problem (just wanted to tell you) (I´m sure I hava a lot too - I´m German XD)

It was nice to look so deep in Senpais mind.
I was shocked at first.. Morinagas broken nose - I could have killed Senpai for his selfishness - but in the end I thought - if there would really be a so long manga-story about the tyrant who falls in love.. then I think Senpai would NEVER say "I love you" to him without an accident.

He would only say it if something terrible would happen to Morinaga. For example a deadly disease, a horrible accident.. And he would even more say it if it was Senpais fault.
So in the end I have to say: It´s a great story.
You did great and I liked it :)

[pofika]

Thanks for your lovely words.
I do like fanfic when it’s good, and sometimes fans make up some nice stories and write surprisingly well. The problem is that I don’t have much time to read them. And though my English is not good enough my brain produce stories which are wanted out and I hope I can write them just good enough to be enjoyed by the Tyrant fans.
I’m writing another story, need a few more months to finish it (then proofread it). I didn’t have a proofreader for my first, but next time I’ll ask somebody. I hate stupid mistakes, and my grammatical oddities also need checking.
I’m glad you like Unspoken words, especially that you are not a big fan of funfics :-)

[lilmiyavi]

Oh god!
I wrote hoPPy ... EMBARRASSING!!!
I mean hoBBy ... >_________<

Oh really?
Tell me when your next fic is ready, I´ll read it :)

[pofika]

Ah, don’t worry about it, I figured what you meant.
OK, I’ll let you know :-)
Thanks again.

[lilmiyavi]

Great :)

Have you read "The Tyrant who falls in love 8 - 11.5"?
So cute >//

[pofika]

The numbers are confusing since vol.7 stretched longer than a usual volume, but if you refer to the one when Souichi’s thoughts are re-played then yes, I read it. I think I’ve read everything Tyrant :-)