Synergism

[poeticparadigm]

          My soul was strewn across the page

Comments

[asphaltthenoon]

this has excellent, excellent rhythm to it. seriously, really great beat. bounces along. good good.

[poeticparadigm]

thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the rhythm actually, coz (as I just edited into it) this was co-written by me and a friend. we constructed it stanza-by-stanza (doing one each). I'm really proud of it.