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fic: this is my coat of arms

Jul 24, 2011 20:13

Title: this is my coat of arms
Author: poeelektra
Fandom/ Pairing: Rookie Blue, Swarek/McNally
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1174
Summary: She opens the door to find Sam, standing there looking like he’d rather be anywhere but on her front porch at nine o’clock on a Thursday night.
Author's Note: For lowriseflare, who requested Andy-in-peril, Luke indisposed.

( this is my coat of arms )

rookie blue, fic

Comments 7

marcybanks July 25 2011, 01:04:58 UTC

Whew.... Hot than this heatwave. Don't suppose yoou would consider continuing this...
Way too terrific to be a one parter!!!

poeelektra July 29 2011, 18:35:28 UTC

HA, thanks! There isn't any more to this but definitely other one-shots coming, so stay tuned.

surreallis July 25 2011, 02:38:56 UTC

It’s his Training Officer voice, the one that nudges a tumbler somewhere down deep and simultaneously makes her want to snap to attention and scratch an itch. That voice has been confusing the shit out of her since the beginning, and if she didn’t trust it so absolutely (so ridiculously), Andy would slam the door in his face just to shut out the bizarre unrest it unfurls in her chest.

Gahhhhh, that part is SO GOOD. Well, no, I mean all of it is good, but I love that paragraph so much! And the way Andy doesn't want to admit she's scared, because cops shouldn't BE scared, especially when they're women. And just... 'invite me in' and... LOVE.

I'm so excited we're getting more fic for this pairing. Eee!

poeelektra July 29 2011, 18:39:05 UTC

I think Andy is scared ALL THE TIME, and everything she does, from playing dress-up in a cop uniform to shoving Sam up against his wall to jumping on the marriage train with Luke, is a big treadmill-run attempt to get away from her fear. Oh Andy...I wouldn't love you so much if you did not have Sam Swarek's love to recommend you.

Thanks for reading!

assassin4hre July 26 2011, 17:19:11 UTC

Holy cow this was amazing!! I love your descriptions of Sam's actions...everything just seemed so in character for both of them. And your description of Andy's fears was so spot on IMO. Definitely too amazing to just be a one shot! Lol I wanna know what happens after the super sexy "Invite me in."

poeelektra July 29 2011, 18:41:11 UTC

Hee, sorry I didn't deliver the sexytimes in this one! But Porn Battle things are happening, keep your eyes peeled for everyone to get their cookie over there.

anr January 28 2012, 08:26:43 UTC

Very nice! :)