Hair troubles

Jan 22, 2006 13:12

I have finally figured out why most yaoi couples, hell, most straight couples, have one with long hair and one with relatively short.
this little drabble suggested itself to me last night, and it's a pity i don't have any characters to do it with.

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Hair
They couldn't both fall asleep with their hair unbound again. As wonderfully romantic as it was to see his lover's hair fanned out across his own, dark red-brown in startling contrast to his own pale blond, almost silver locks... It had been rather embarassing having to be cut free of the giant knot they'd created in their sleep.
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that last line bothers me.
must work on it a bit more, i think.

writing, hair

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