Fanfiction - I'm so sorry, I still love you...

[crazy_otaku911]

Title: I'm so sorry, I still love you. (Aka - 5 times Takaki cheated on Daiki)
Author: Ritsu (crazy_otaku911)
Pairing: Takaki Yuya X Arioka Daiki // Hashimoto Ryousuke X Takaki Yuya
Rating: R
Summary: Boys are stupid, love is stupid, hearts wander, and they break.
Disclaimer: This work is purely fiction.
Warnings: Cheating, slash, implied/vague smut.
A/N: Beta

Comments

[keeconk]

T__________T
poor daiki.. poor takaki.. poor hasshi too actually..
but most of all poor shintaro!!!! *gets slapped*

too much angst for me :'(
but it's well written!! :D

[crazy_otaku911]

Haha, the baby got scarred, I'm sorry~

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you at least thought it was well written.

[hotfruits]

YUUUUYAAAAN DX
YOU MADE ME CRY WITH YOUR BEAUTIFUL FIC YOU MEANIE PANTS!

[crazy_otaku911]

Is that Yuuyan as in the fic or Yuuyan as in me?
I'm SORRY KOUKOU!!!!! D:

But thanks for calling it beautiful~

[hotfruits]

Uh...both? *huggles*

It was, I loved it so much <3

[crazy_otaku911]

*snugs you*

<3 I'm glad you liked it!

Even if it's not your fic. ._.

[yamapiislove]

nyahaha~
i don't know why, but i love cheating Takaki xD
i'm so weird. poor Dai-chan~
and poor Shintaro too, and Ryutaro, who probably has to explain to Shintaro about this stuff.
xD

thank you~ i really enjoyed it :)

[crazy_otaku911]

I actually normally hate cheating in most cases, but I didn't....mind this one? idk. xDD

I can only imagine how awkward that would be to explain. Aw, Ryu~

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

[kodochalover]

Takaki needs to find out the real reason why Hasshi broke up with him O__O
until then everything Hasshi says is bullshit lol

but awwwwwwwwwwwwwww Dai-chan..... I love you T^T
i hate seeing you hurt like this... but you did nag a lot hun...

“Truly, Yuya...I'm not surprised.” Yuya glanced down, avoiding his leader's serious gaze. “Not just the break up, but the cheating as well.You two are far too impulsive.” Yabu went on, not being harsh, just honest. “Especially you. You don't think about things, you just do what first comes to you.”

*claps at yabu* YES!!! true, very true!
im so glad he told this to Takaki. I was kind of annoyed at everyone elses reactions lol

Either way, this fic got me crying lol
I LOVED IT!!!
thankyou!!
I truly enjoyed reading it^^

[crazy_otaku911]

Actually, Hasshi telling Daiki why he broke up with Yuya was originally going to be the ending...but it didn't fit right with the change of perspective, so I'll be writing a sequel, eventually. XD

I felt bad for making him a brat, but there are ever so slight hints of that and everyone knows that love can sometimes bring out the worst in you.

Leader-chan is good, ne?

Awww, I don't really like making people cry but zomg, glad you liked it! Thank you for reading it, bb <3

[faiasakura]

DAI-CHANNNNNN! T-----T how sad for him...XD
Although I'm happy Takaki decided on Hasshi since Daiki is portrayed as really annoying in this fic. ^^ WHY DID HASSHI BREAK UP WITH HIM IN THE FIRST PLACE?!?! You know you want to write a sequel~ /shot XD

Hey, can you explain where TakaHasshi comes from? Junior days, but I'm don't know much about JUMP when they were juniors and such, so yeah....><
Love the pairing for some reason though!

So, love the fic! Just enough angst to be a well-balanced cheating fic (in my opinion at least). I'm questioning how you spell some of the names, but I know that there are technically multiple ways to spell things so...whatever I guess. XD
Really like this!! ^.^

[crazy_otaku911]

Yeah...I made him kinda bratty, didn't I? But I can somehow see that happening so for me at least, it works? xD And yes, there will be a sequel. ^^

Aaah. TakaHasshi came from pre-JUMP days when Takaki was in JJExpress, a group Hasshi was also in. They caught my attention due to being eyecandy but apparently they had a lot of love going on. I'm not really that sure on all of it as I got into JE right as JUMP debuted...I fell in love with the pair due to an RP (which will probably contribute to how different my Hasshi is then most?) Takahasshi wins, though! I wish more people wrote them~

I know that I'm sort of inconsistent with how I spell things, but yeah, there are technically so many ways, I usually just go with the one I think looks best. Like Yuya instead of Yuuya but Kouta instead of Kota.

In any case, thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it!