Fanfiction - I Can't Go Back (Chapter 1)

[crazy_otaku911]

Title: I Can't Go Back. (Chapter 1)
Author: Ritsu (crazy_otaku911)
Pairing: Takaki Yuya X OC (Suzuki Ryohei), Takaki Yuya X Yabu Kouta
Rating: Overall: NC-17 - Current: PG-13
Summary: Yuya is at the scene of the crime, before he leaves with the boss to the hospital. Yuuri calls them and gives Yuya the shock of his life.
Disclaimer: This work is purely fiction.

Comments

[hammiexsquirrel]

*happily spams you back*

LOOOOOOOOOOOL YUUTO~!!!! <3333 I like your OC's so far XDDD

JKDSJFKSAJFLWAEJ;FAWJFW A TAKAKI IS SO EFFING COOL HERE~!!!!

EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?! CHINEN SMOKES?! SJKALFJw;lfjwal;fjawlk;fjlaw x__________________________x *storms off to find Ryutaro to help him "get on the right track"*

LOL I knew it was Ryouhei!! XDD *shot* Can't wait for updates? XDD

[crazy_otaku911]

*loves spam <3*

Yuto, my dork <3 I love him so much, omg!! And...there's only one OC in this story. Hayami actually exists (and she is gorgeous, I'm so jealous...)

TAKAKI IS SO COOL WHEN HE IS NOT BEING AN UTTER DORK, NYA!? <3 ^____^

And...haha, if you think this Chinen is wild/bad, then you should see what my Yakuza RP Chinen used to be. Now he was insane.

*is working on posting the next one?* I'm a slow writer.

[anilee0510]

>w<

Yuuto is just adorkable <33 Oh really? XDD *doesn't follow female Japanese idols that closely* LOOL Who's the boss then? YOU?! XDD

YESH HE IS~!!!! Oh gawd, if Takaki actually got this sort of role in a drama *spazzes out*

O______________________O I've tried RP-ing before, but it kinda died xDD Whut did your yakuza RP!Chinen do? Break all hell loose?

Not that slow. I'm only fast on Refuge cuz I finished the whole thing and like to torture my readers If I was churning out each new chapter after I just finished...there will be month gaps between each chapter XDD

[crazy_otaku911]

Yuto and Hayami only make sense if you're part of kyoto_high. I only know her because of that. And...the boss is the boss from the Closer, I'm just not using her name XD

*dies* He needs a new drama now that his G3 stuff is over all the way.

I'm addicted 8D And Yakuza!Chinen....omg, how to describe. Let's say.....Yakuza slut with a gun and a very unstable mental state..or something like that. Actually, right now, he's just a cute little kitten in Keito's lap, because he lost his memories. (His ex-boyfriend used to be Ogata Yamato, if that tells you anything about his personality).

I'm usually really slow. This one's been faster, but I have a play this weekend, so I don't know when the next one'll be.

[anilee0510]

LOL I see XDD I still dunno what The Closer is though *too lazy to look it up* OTL

I rather see Ryutaro in a drama TAT

O___________O SOMEHOW, I'M INTERESTED BY THE UNSTABLE MENTAL STATE XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Awwwwwwwwww♥ *reads Keito's name as Ryutaro* *shotshotshot* Oh my XDDD

LOL, it's okay take your time xDD

[crazy_otaku911]

It's a good show XD If you ever do look it up XD

They all need dramas! Ryu, Keito, Inoo....Yeah <3

Oh, he was very interesting. He snapped and went on a rampage...Killed like, a whole bunch of the gang and nearly killed his mother. Massacre. Then he woke up with no memories.

^_^

[hammiexsquirrel]

LOL I'll tuck it into the back of my mind for future usage xD

YESH YESH YESH TAT Damn you Yamada

O_____________________O T-T-T-THAT'S SO COOL~!!!!!! What made him snap? Who did he killed? Did he kill anyone I would care about or just random people thrown there to get killed? And why did he stop? TELL ME MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE~~!!!!

*sits down with bag of popcorn*

OH YEAH WAS HE USING WEAPONS!? XDD

[crazy_otaku911]

Well, it was just a lot of things? One: He was the heir to the Sasaki gang. Two: His best friend beat the living crap out of him because the friend was jealous of Chinen and Yamada. Three: He and his mom were having a bit of a relationship struggle. Four: Due to the yakuza war, Chinen was placed under guard and unable to see Yamato at all, who in turn went kinda crazy and ended up in the hospital for some mental therapy, where he also got very cozy with Ren. Five: Enemy gang sends Chinen pictures of said getting cozy...with all the various pressure and hurt, the fact that his lover didn't seem to even miss/want/love him anymore just broke him down

[anilee0510]

Oh. Mai. Ga. *_______________________________________________*

That was epic awesomeness. jkdakfwjlf;akfjlawkfka HE IS SO CUTE AND ADORABLE W/O MEMORIES~!!!! <3333333333

[crazy_otaku911]

You should read the KeiChii logs. Now THOSE are really cute :3

[anilee0510]

I WAAAAAAAAAANT TO~!!! *just too lazy to look for them*

[crazy_otaku911]

First one - http://akirashock.yamashita-tomohisa.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=1770&st=0&start=0

Second one - http://akirashock.yamashita-tomohisa.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=1830

Second one is not finished XD

[hammiexsquirrel]

O___O

*clicks and reads*

OH AND I'M SORRY I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO READ OR COMMENT ON YOUR LATEST CHAPTER! BLAME SCHOOL, I SHALL GET TO IT THIS WEEKEND TAT

OH MY EFFING GOD, IT'S SEVEN PAGES?! O________O kdsljalkwajf;wa f;l BUNNY PLUSHIES FTW~!!!! <333 If the next fic I post is Okachii, I blame you

dhfjaksefkaljfewfjaw;elkheoithwfja IT'S SO CUUUUUTE~!!! ♥♥♥

[crazy_otaku911]

It's okay. ^^;; RL has swallowed us all :D

And yeah, XD It's not done yet. I'm not sure how/when it'll end.

And I will totally take all the blame for OkaChii :D

:D :D :D I'm glad you think so <3