[One-shot] There's nothing left to bleed

[crazy_otaku911]

Title: There's nothing left to bleed
Author: crazy_otaku911
Groups/Pairings: Kis-My-Ft2 (with Takki + small appearance of Sanada) - Gen, (but there are shimmering little delusional sniffs of K/F, S/2, and M/T... and if you really want, Y/I ;| )
Rating: R
Summary: AU - When Fujigaya goes missing while on a solo run, Kitayama and the rest of his team will stop at

Comments

[rin_aokuro]

i just have no words atm. *____*

ok actually i DO have some, and my (almost) first words are "please write some more of this AU? ;____;♥" oh, god i loved it. like, really. it's been a while since i've read anything _new that i've not read before and omg this fic's just pure awesomeness. i loved them all, especially nikaido for being such...idk. i don't know the word in english. (actually now that i think i don't even know how i'd say it in finnish. :'D) but, i love the nika you wrote here. ♥

it was good you wrote some of fujigaya's thoughts there, too. even though it was just plain awful to read him suffering so much, it made the story somehow more powerful. like, even though the others couldn't know how he felt, still after each taipi-paragraph it felt like they were even more determined to save him.

i also loved it how they weren't, like...how should i say it? they were rougher than usually. i mean, sometimes there are fics where they're not just happily dancing and smiling etc, but actually doing something that's usually considered "bad", but still they're usually...idk. softer. nicer. i don't know how to explain what i mean. hmm. i liked it how, when the enemy man didn't tell kitayokoo what they wanted to know, yokoo just coldly shot towards him. like, they weren't only threatening but also doing what they said they would if he didn't obey. i don't mean i like violence or shooting or anything but...oh, why is this so difficult? :'3 you get my point? killing is bad, but...when the "good guys" do it, it actually looks cool in books and movies.

you managed to write an exciting, thrilling and purely awesome story. i'd love to read more this kind of stories. ♥ this day has been great from the beginning to the end, so thank you for making my evening even better with this. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ <-- a heart for each of the kisumai boys~

[crazy_otaku911]

... Uwaaaa. x: Surprised. This is such a lovely comment, thank you!

HAHA. Okay, so I totally wrote this with the intention of being a total git and never continue this, but, points above, I'm starting to think of side stories. 8D;; Derpface, this is not supposed to be happening.

But I'm glad you liked it! Especially Nika, he was a fun little piece of work. :D And Taipi's pieces were sad to write, but I wanted to try and bridge the gap that he was always there, even if he was the end goal, you know?

And I think I get what you mean! I admit, it wasn't supposed to be a dark as it turned out to be, but when I started trying to work out Kitayama and the team, I wanted to show that they, especially Kitayama, was in a dark place. Like you said, it's not good, and they are brutal, but as a team, they all understand that protecting what's important to you comes at a high price and they're willing to pay it, even if it's not what most people would consider acceptable... something like that? It was important to have them follow through with their threats, because so often you'll see people who will just throw their words around but not really do anything, and I wanted to illustrate that they are determined and real enough to follow through with their threats. It's not pretty, at all. x: But I dunno, developing them was interesting.

Awww. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Thanks! This comment was pretty awesome. :D And today has been a great day. I'm not sure if I'll ever manage more of this sort of thing, but if I can, it'll be around. Thanks again!