[One-shot] Tick-tock, tick-tock

Aug 11, 2011 00:39

Title: Tick-tock, tick-tock
Author: crazy_otaku911
Groups/Pairings: Kisumai - Ki/F (+Ishigaki and bits of Taiga-tachi)
Rating: PG
Summary: Striketeam!AU. Fujigaya's recovery is tricky and Kitayama doesn't want to just stand by and watch.
Disclaimer: This work is purely fiction.
Warnings: Slight brokenness on Fujigaya's part.
A/N: A continuation of this, which ( Read more... )

c: ishigaki daisuke, #one-shot, c: fujigaya taisuke, v: striketeam, r: pg, !fanfiction, c: kitayama hiromitsu

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omoikkiri August 11 2011, 04:50:40 UTC
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH;EHAKLGEHJLWKAW;AGHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEAW;GKLA;JA ♥♥♥ *SPARKLES A LA MIYACCHI*

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crazy_otaku911 August 11 2011, 04:53:49 UTC
I GOT A MIYACCHI SPARKLE OMG. ☆

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omoikkiri August 11 2011, 09:07:00 UTC
Kitayama reached over, taking Fujigaya’s hand. It was all it took to get Fujigaya scrambling closer
MY FAVORITE ♥
Because it's like, an involuntary, subconscious trust F has in Ki (also vice versa if that were applicable), which sort of echoes how they are with each other irl, I think. Obviously not this dramatic, but you know XD

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IN UR FICS LEOPARD-PRINTING UR AUs \o/ omoikkiri August 11 2011, 09:49:45 UTC
'Curses on the Genesis Project and its linger after-effects,' Yokoo thought to himself, glaring at the pile of cloth at his feet with savage animosity. It was the burnt orange upholstery he'd just now (lovingly, so as to not scratch or dirty the van) stripped from Kyon. He had loved this cloth, damn it.

Suddenly shifting the focus of his glare, he turned towards the rest of his unit, clustered together in the empty parking space next to Kyon. "You!" He pointed a finger at Tamamori, "Senbei crumbs on the seat cover! And you!" (this time pointing at Senga) "juice stains all over! Nikaido, Miyata, throw your trash away properly instead of littering up my baby! And Kitayama-"

He broke off briefly as Fujigaya began chuckling, still a rare occurrence these days though the younger man was getting much better, but then carried on as sternly as before. "Kitayama and Fujigaya... don't think you I don't know what you two did in the van last night ( ... )

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omoikkiri August 11 2011, 09:50:37 UTC
Augh a typo! lingering*

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Re: IN UR FICS LEOPARD-PRINTING UR AUs \o/ crazy_otaku911 August 11 2011, 12:07:19 UTC
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHHAHAHHAA

OMG, BEST THING TO WAKE UP TO, EVER. xD YOKOO, YOUR LIFE IS HARD. (AND IIDA, SO ABUSED, WEEEEEH XDDDDD)

lmao, dying. x: How dare Kitayama and Fujigaya sully his baby. And crumbs! And juice stains! The scandal. (AND TONO. LMAO. BUT YOKOO, KYON CAN BE ALL LOVING AND RAINBOWS ON THE INSIDE 8DDDDD)

(YAY, YOU WROTE SOMETHING!! 8DDDD)

(WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY STRIKETEAM AU, SOBBING.)

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Re: IN UR FICS LEOPARD-PRINTING UR AUs \o/ elindar October 5 2011, 07:40:16 UTC
omg, YOKOO ILU. ♥ and his dear, poor kyon.
"Did Tono drop by this morning?" dyyiiinnggg. (and i never thought leopard print could get any worse, but wth, rainbow-colored. XDD oh taipi.)

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rin_aokuro October 4 2011, 22:23:44 UTC
Ewwww I'm just crying here so much. ;;_______;; Reading about Taipi being like that - it just feels too awful. Poor, poor boy. I'm happy Kitayama's there for him~ (Btw I'm just melting here when I imagine Kitayama's face when he calls Taipi with his first name. Taisuke~ ♥)

I just simply loved the fic, even though it's sad and makes me cry. ♥

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crazy_otaku911 October 5 2011, 01:00:04 UTC
Aw. :( I'm... Sorry you cried. (Though I am glad you felt so much emotion for it! ♥) I sort of... working with Fujigaya was so hard, he was so broken after the original fic. (And I like... like, playing around with how Kitayama calls Fujigaya, depending on the situation. so. ♥ But.)

Thank youuuu. ♥ I am really glad you liked it. ;;

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rin_aokuro October 5 2011, 10:55:43 UTC
Aww no no, no need to be sorry at all. It's a good thing when your fics make people cry. :'3 Right as you said, it's great when fics can awake such emotions. :3

I know - in general, playing with names IS fun~ ♥ ^^

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elindar October 5 2011, 07:28:07 UTC
ahsgdjsh;djhsa aawwww. the best possible thing to wake up to!
i reeally like this verse, and i still love your kitayama to bits. ♥ and taipiii. ;; please be alright.
i don't know what to say... except that i've never known i like hurt/comfort k/f this much. i think you did a good job with both characters. this was intense, emotional and sad, but still hopeful towards the end. loved it!
♥♥

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crazy_otaku911 October 5 2011, 14:38:02 UTC
Aw ♥

I am actually becoming rather fond of this verse too. ;; Which is ridic because it wasn't supposed to exist outside of the original oneshot. EEP. But the boys, they call to me. ♥

I'm really glad you liked it and thank you, thank you, thank you. x: ♥♥♥

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kuro_chin October 5 2011, 11:46:44 UTC
...o.o I never commented.

NOW I WILL.

Because this is awesome and it still breaks my heart and oh kitayama, why are you so precious i want you, and fujigaya, you cute thing please get better, you make me sad. :| ♥ I had this squeezy feeling in my chest while reading this, unpleasant like I was hurting too, but the ending made it better. ♥ They're so cute together, even when it's all messed up like that. :/

Write moar. :D

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crazy_otaku911 October 5 2011, 14:39:30 UTC
Uwaa o:

YAY :D

;; I am honored that it got such an emotional response. Eeh. ♥ ;; And I just really have come to love KitaFuji in this verse and Fujigaya gets all the way better, I promise. ♥

I... will try! XDD

Thank youuuuuuu ♥

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