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[plutospawn]

I'm getting fed up with the goauche, I think. Instead of just the one, now I've got two unfinished goauche sketches. I can't win.

So I'm fiddling with ink and ignoring them for now.

Comments

[siujerkjai]

Awesome. I love the pen work you've been doing lately. And I like the kind of over-the-shoulder perspectives. Great expressions, too, especially with Dustil and Revan. Revan looks kind of suspicious and Dustil looks like he's about to give him a reason to be.

[plutospawn]

I think some kind of divide and conquer power play could be fun between those three if it comes up.

And I like the kind of over-the-shoulder perspectives.
Maybe that's the problem with the goauche ones. All the figures are on the same picture plane, so they're a little dull, compositionally. I need to stop whining and just do them so I can toss them in my drawer and get them off my desk.

[midnight_hawk]

I love the atmosphere in these, although it took me a good few minutes to realise that it was a lemon type thing in Yuthura's drink and not some funky Twi'lek face jewellery.

[plutospawn]

Oh man, I must've been staring at it too long, because I didn't see that at all and now that you mention it... hahaha. I did notice that the bottom of her lekku almost looks like a boob highlight in all the black. It needs more depth.

In a perfect world where I have an attention span longer than the average goldfish, I want to work these over in Photoshop. Smooth out the black at the very least, maybe toss in another color, like a black or a purple and maybe that would help differentiate some of the lines a little better.

[plutospawn]

With little word bubbles!

"I do not trust you!"
"I am trying to cop a feel!"
"What the hell is going on?"

I will be lame and demand that the correct answer be E)Plutonium

[prisoner__24601]

Those are both pretty kickass. I especially love the facial expressions in the first one. Revan looks like he's considering putting the smack down on both of them, the Exile looks like she might talk some smack back, and Dustil looks like he's up to no good and about to unleash chaos on both of them.

Yuthura's facial tattoos are sweet looking (and I love the wary look on her face) and poor wheelchair bound Carth looks so tired and sad. Shame on Kim for crippling him!

[plutospawn]

You know, when I first heard Yuthura, my gut reaction was, "Meh." And I love that I've been proven completely wrong. And I don't know if it's because he comes off as such a hardass or just because I want to see what happens when somebody puts the cookie jar on a too high shelf out of his reach, but I would be perfectly okay if it just turned into the crippled Carth show.

Excellent

[nivenus]

Great work. Would love to see more illustrations of our misadventures - either from you or elsewhere. They're not an entirely realistic style but that's okay as you still get who's who and what's going on.