The Worst Journey in the World Part One

[shapinglight]

A bit late to the party, here is my contribution to plot_wout_porn. I'm posting it in parts one after the other, in one big lump, a poll on my LJ having determined that most people would prefer that (not that I've had any option really, as I've been away all weekend).

Title: The Worst Journey in the World
Author: shapinglight
Prompt: From a prompt by bruttimabuoniFandom: Buffyverse

Comments

[helenkacan]

On-the-spot comments:
Love:
The trapped by the fine print description of Wesley's existence.
Wesley's unspoken desperation.
Spike biting the lead sled dog on the nose. ::giggles::
The dynamic between the three.
The visceral (anyone want to say "Eww") feeling of an unwashed Buffy.

Now, on to Part 2!

[shapinglight]

Love your on the spot comments, and particularly appreciate the typo catches. Glad you like it so far.

[moscow_watcher]

Quite a ride you prepared for us!

*runs off to read the next chapter*

[shapinglight]

Thanks. Hope you enjoy the rest of it.

[whichclothes]

Ooh! I'm totally engrossed, impending Spuffiness aside.

[shapinglight]

Well, the Spuffiness is implicit really, so hopefully it won't be too bothersome.

[rebcake]

Oh! So plotty! I am in awe. The mystery, the brutality of nature (and their natures), and the inevitability are making for quite the page-turner (clicker?).

Plus, Spike makes a divine Executive Officer. I would say more, but I must get to the next chapter, stat.

[shapinglight]

Plus, Spike makes a divine Executive Officer.

He does, doesn't he? Much prettier than Colonel Tigh from BSG. Glad you like it so far.

[brutti_ma_buoni]

You did take this prompt! I loved the frozen sea image, and you've found a proper justification for it with the other dimension, which is great.

So Wes is evil-but-not. And Buffy's eating for two... And, best of all, if their heroics are successful, no one's going to notice a thing.

Very speedily moving on to the next parts!

[shapinglight]

Glad you like what I did with the prompt so far. :)