Fic : Little Patch of Paradise

Apr 26, 2008 23:06


Title: Little patch of paradise
Pairing: Yesung/Kyuhyun
Rating: PG
Warnings: AU
Words: 624
Summary : Kyuhyun's escape is invaded by a mysterious stranger
Comments: For the Read more... )

100 suju fic challenge, super junior

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beevosteethos April 27 2008, 01:09:04 UTC
... what can I say? Just beautiful. I really, really liked this.
I wasn't supposed to sit and read it (since its 2am!) but Kyuhyun caught my eye and the fic itself pulled me in before I could tab it. ^^

I would quote half the fic back at you but it would literally be me quoting the entire thing. Beautiful ♥♥♥

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no1_jo April 27 2008, 01:15:17 UTC
you are here but not HERE WHAT IS THIS TREE?!!!
I'm watching Russel Brand talk abou sending stalker emails to Serena WIlliamson Jonathon Ross XDD

and lol I thought the Kyuhyun would draw you in *is sneaky* I even had to upload an appropriate (ish) icon <3

and HELL YEAH 6 in a row now *boogies insanely*

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beevosteethos April 27 2008, 01:22:38 UTC
I am here but I am ninjaaaa...and also not on MSN. XDDD
Lol, you have to love the Love-Muscle Russel. ^_~

What can I say, the Kyuhyun love knows no bounds, or time limit it seems (2AM!). I've been watching SujuM stuff on YT and loving all over the entire unit (and Kyuhyun's awkardness *mentally squishes*) so this fic was timed about right. =DD

I approve of the sneaky though, and the icon. *grins*

Dude. I have no words, other than I really liked this one. More than the Sugmin one, if I really think about it and that isn't 'cos of the Kyu bias XD. I didn't think you'd be able to have a break, you are clearly fruitcake...but it gets me Kyuhyun so I'm not saying a word. Lol. *glompcuddles*

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no1_jo April 27 2008, 01:33:43 UTC
Yes, he is growing on me with his strange flamingo sex ways ^_^

It morphed!!! I started it intending to homage ze London bench and have them meeting to spaz overthings for hours but it did it itself 0______0 and then it wanted to become death fic again :P which i STILL like and might do a alternate ending yet :P

and BOO at lac of msn-ness, my neurotism is spillingover >_

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momiji_manjuu April 27 2008, 10:10:21 UTC

Maybe if he went and sat down, exuding male territorial pheromones or something
*giggles* I can't imagine any of SuJu being so undeniably masculine and frightening XDD

The Plan -since he was proud of it's craftiness it deserved a capital-
LMAO Oh I wish you could use proper emoticons in here, that's SO worthy of the little emo rolling around on the floor in hysterics XDD

Bubble-companion, I like it XD

Oh, and because you emailed me asking for a beta (and I'm soo sorry I didn't get back to you, I fell asleep and only got the email this morning X_x)..
his bubble-companion what he could see of him anyway, shocking himself
This bit seems like it should be in hyphens, then past tense, so.. '..his bubble-companion - what he could see of him, anyway - and shocked himself..'
What do you think?

A smile that was simply heaven. A face that rescued his world from it's spiral into blackness and he didn't need the bench anymore, it was perfect right here.Ohh that was lovely ( ... )

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no1_jo April 27 2008, 12:17:21 UTC
Hahahaha, I imagine Kangin could manage it, but yeah I know what you mean XD

LOL!!! I always wanna use emoticons while I'm writing things actually! That line would get the plots rubbing hands and chin one :P

Wavelength is working for ya, I totally know what you mean, and yeah they di kinda hav big backstories, but it would be long droning and monotonous to put the all in.

*loves all over you* <3

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cruel_disorder April 27 2008, 18:01:17 UTC
Maybe if he went and sat down, exuding male territorial pheromones or something, the other would get uncomfortable, feel crowded and leave him alone with his bench

Your Kyuhyun is adorable xD Yesung totally kepy returning to the bench to catch a glimpse of Kyu's very very attractive smile~ ♥

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no1_jo April 27 2008, 19:49:18 UTC
Aww thank you very much XDD

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no1_jo April 28 2008, 01:14:02 UTC
XDD I'm having recent extra love for Yesung so I think I talked him up quite a lot :P and Kyuhyun will always be the cute little one to me XDD

and YAY you found it cute <3

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sugarwarrior April 28 2008, 00:45:46 UTC
YOUR KYU ICON IS SO COLORFUL AND CUTEEEE LOL~
This fic is absolutely calming @_______@;; not monotonous at all♥
alkdfjdsflkdjas mysteriousness matches YehSung OH SO WELL<33

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no1_jo April 28 2008, 01:17:14 UTC
XDD all credit to whoever I credited in my pics for it, my Photshop skills are only good for basic icons atm ^_^

Awww I kinda wanna find my own bench now actually XD

But I'm really glad you liked it (and that I didn't make it deathfic again like I was tempted to, somehow Yesungs brings it out of me 0____0)

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sugarwarrior April 28 2008, 01:23:33 UTC
LOL
YOUR ICON. AGAIN!!
<333333333
YehSung's so cuteeeeeeee nevertheless♥

Hehe, my skills aren't so great either.. XDDDD I just find a pretty tutorial and use it, although sometimes the pictures I use aren't exactly that match-y with the tut @__@;

XDDDDD nooooo (~*-*)~ Please don't.. write.. a death!fic? DDx If you do, put a warning on it so I won't read it LOL~
I'll still support you though, it's just that I don't support any angst and death fics DDDDDD; they make me feel heavily burdened and cry A LOT lol

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no1_jo April 28 2008, 01:40:56 UTC
LOL!!! and really is!! I do have extra love for him being older too in a fandom of so many men younger than me :P

Ohhhh I've never tried those.

Lol, hopefully I won't be doing another death!fic anytime soon, but with 93 more fics it could happen. I'll have to make up for it with lots of fluffy ones ^_^

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