Fic : Craving

[no1_jo]

Title: Craving
Pairing: Yesung/Shindong
Rating: R maybe NC-17
Warnings: chocolate, licking, fantasising, sex
Words: 535
Summary: Shindong catches sigt of Yesung's abs and can't get them out of his mind.
Comments: For the 

Comments

Re: Awww~ I have a fic dedicated to me ^^

[no1_jo]

LOL well you got me going so of course! <3

It's te same video that says Yesung has a six-pack tht rivals Siwon's but he has a big birthmark or something so he doesn't like showing it off.

and yup defo chocolate Donghae says it (in english even so I'm sure that's what he says) at 4.49

You're welcome XDD

Re: Awww~ I have a fic dedicated to me ^^

[no1_jo]

He should!!! and after a bit o skimming I found that bit too rightat the begining of this vid ^_^

and I've added them to the post now like i shoulda done originally *headdesk*

There's an AWESOME bit at the end of part 4 i think where Heechul impersonates Kibum, which you HAVE to see cuz Kibums response is HILARIOUS!

[missatralissa]

alksfhasf

i love you.

[no1_jo]

Ooooh I do so enjoy love confessions before bed ♥

[skittles]

.....are you serious? ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS?

I CAN'T EVEN COME UP WITH A COHERENT RESPONSE TO THIS RIGHT NOW. BECAUSE I'M TOO BUSY GRINNING LIKE ZHOU MI AND IMAGINING THE DIRTY THINGS SHINDONG AND YESUNG ARE DOING RIGHT NOW IN KOREA AND OH MY GOD YOU HAD SHINDONG BOTTOM.

PLEASE EXCUSE ME, I'LL BE BACK TOMORROW WITH MORE COHERENCE.

[no1_jo]

OMG YAY!!! I'm SO glad you liked it!!! I was all ACK have I overplayed the oral fixations so very sereotypically >_<

and Zhoumi grinning is WIN!!!! I shall consider this a success!! (and once again avoid the fact I haven't done Heechuls yet :P)

Of course they are doing dirty things, all that pretty at least one of them ouldbe tempted no? ^_~

♥

[skittles]

OMG NO!!! It was lovely and gorgeous and the perfect amount of smut. <33333

You know I can't wait for you to do Heechul's. I will probably die of happiness.

[no1_jo]

*love on you LOTS AND LOTS AND LOTS* <333

Oh god, pressure!! :P But also so so sweet! and it's really helping me knuckle down to it! I'm far too good at procratinating from it :P

[dalpaengee]

XDDDD THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY. Because seriously, Shindong needs more sex than he normally gets in fic. And Yesung's birthmark owns my soul (even though I don't think I've ever even seen it?) because I don't have a birthmark and I always wanted one and realy he should show it off. And smouldering!Shindong!!!! YES YES YES~!!!

[no1_jo]

YAY XD and yes he does indeed!!! and now I'v dusted off the stigma ofhim bing hard to write I'll happily contribute when inspired ^_^

LOL what a random thing to want <3 and I don't think I've seen it either, h must be really careful about it i suppose ^_^

Thank you so much for commenting XDD

[vix_4711]

ERAT^J%$%£$TRY%M$ %^EH I think my brain just exploded.
I have no quoting comment, because the whole thing was so good I forgot to take note of the bits I especially loved - although I think you'd just have the whole fic pasted back in italics if I tried.

Yesung being so forward is SO MUCH LOVE! And all the chocolate references made it so much sweeter (pun honest to god not intended).

I'm catching up on all my commenting, did you notice yet? XDD

[no1_jo]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO exploding brain not good!!!!

and he pun is accidentla genius then XDDDD

This is such a random one too!! Clarly I should do all my fics spurr of the moment so I don't end up lingering on them for yonks on end :P

♥