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Protectobot Beginnings: Activation

Jan 24, 2009 22:21

Title: Protectobot Beginnings: Activation
Rating: PG
Summary: Ratchet's thoughts as he and Wheeljack bring the Protectobots online for the first time.
Wordcount: 2534

This is the last of things I have mostly written out, so ya'll are spared until next November probably :P

( Ratchet had mixed feelings as he looked at the five still forms... )

fic, protectobots

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desertcat87 January 25 2009, 06:07:24 UTC

I love this! :D Totally and completely adorable. Interesting idea on the optics too! Simple explaination, and totally realistic. Also love how you mention Ratchet having a brother? You must elaborate on this, I'm curious. :3

Also interesting... I too made Spot being the eldest. Aid however, in my story, was the youngest with Blades being the second oldest XD LOVE how Spot came online too... how he's so active even then! Very creative storyline so far :3

It's a bit late for me, so I have to get my aft to bed, so to speak. Great ficy though!! Can't wait to see more of your work!

-Des

playswithworms January 26 2009, 02:11:02 UTC

Thanks! And I'm so glad you liked it ^_^

Yeah, Ratchet has a brother...I've got a fairly good guess who it is, but Ratchet's being evasive on confirming it for some reason. Brothers near the same age are a rare thing in my AU - since the reproduction rate has traditionally been so slow, most Cybertronians are only children, or are considered mature mechs before their creators produce a sibling. Having five all at once like this was unheard of before the war - the Autobots had no idea what they were getting in to, creating their first gestalt, and the Decepticons...well, let's just say their gestalts did not have pleasant childhoods...

Ha - I didn't even think of them as being "younger" or "older" than one another though, but I guess they are technically, by a few kliks at least. Reminds me of those shows of families with quints or sextuplets and they always make a big deal over the birth order.

Anyway, enough babbling, lol - have a good night and likewise (on work the more of it to be seeing)

desertcat87 January 26 2009, 03:40:38 UTC

lol Ratchet can be that way me thinks. I had at one point given Wheeljack a brother... if you're curious, I believe I put his picture up on my DA page. I prefer drawing to writting you see. I got loads of works up there. Mostly Spot, I'll have to admit XD It's at DesertCat87.deviantart.com if you'd like to see any of it. I drew the Protectos as humans... Spot in TFA style... lots of crap. XD

I do tend to keep them in birth order for whatever reason XD Spot likes to insist that he's the oldest. He's picky on that fact.

Laters!
-Des

playswithworms January 26 2009, 04:11:46 UTC

Ooh, cool - I especially love your human!First Aid. All of them are just right, actually - Nice interpretation ^_^

desertcat87 January 26 2009, 04:41:31 UTC

Thanks! ^__^ I have a lot of fun doodlin'. I have a few more I need to put up, but alas... no scanner anymore. I'll have to find a way one of these days. I have an adorable one I would love to put up of Hot Spot and Silverbolt enjoying a beach together as humans. (in my verse, Spot is afraid of drowning. Another fic I'm working on explains why but I digress)

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