Apr 10, 2005 19:31
Hey! Lng time no type in. If all my friends aren't busy, would u guys mind reading my poem and tellin me what you think about it? here goes...
EMBER
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There you are, the spark among my cedar
Your voice has become an echo for a hopeless dreamer
I keep holding out and holding on; your out of reach.
There is something unique in the way your heart beats.
Can you see me reaching for you?
Although my body makes its passes.
My eyes will always tell the truth
Despite defensive shields of sashes
And this is how my embers turn to ashes.
There you are, behind the distance of your feelings
Your hand has become that which leads to new beginnings
I keep holding in, I m breaking unto pressure.
You hold the key to unleash that which binds beyond measure.
Can you hear me speaking to you?
Although no words escaped my lips.
The eyes, they tell no lies
No matter what you say you did.
And there I am, the spark that reveals your shadow.
My heart has become the hearth to which you ve out grown
I keep building up and giving in, to what collapses
with every smile your waters build your rapids.
And this is how my embers turn to ashes.
And there you are behind the distance of your feelings
(and my embers turn to ashes)
And there I am , the spark that reveals your shadow
(and my embers turn to ashes)
And there you are the spark among my cedar
(and my embers turn to ashes)
And this is how my embers turn to ashes.
*tear* lol