another song -invocations of a broken heart
uploaded a new song (actually wrote it last year but recorded it this week)
"invocations of a broken heart"
www.myspace.com/facile13
was a total BITCH to mix, but here's what I got so far.. questions, comments, constructive criticism is always welcome.
lyrics..
you're an invocation of a broken heart
i knew better from the start
that you still loved him, so why'd we begin
how'd it go this far?
i never thought i'd feel this way
i'm the one who always pulls away
i thought i could take the pain
all away, but you never let me in
so go and float through the night
ride the tides of a thousand faces burning bright
and i'll take it back
this insane crash
of a heart thats cracked and fell too fast
for you..
i still remember the way you kiss
the blood i tasted on your lips
when it seemed like an angelic being
took me over in that state of bliss
you're an invocation of a broken heart
your touch has left me scars
i can't forget, how you took me in
and tore my walls apart
so go and float through the night
ride the tides of a thousand faces burning bright
and i'll take it back
this insane crash
of a heart thats cracked and fell too fast
for you..
fell too fast for you.
and i won't take
i won't call
i won't talk about the past
and if this heart
doesnt break
i'll either find you out there
or you'll float on past...
you're an invocation of a broken heart
an invocation of a broken heart
and i can't stop
this invocation of a broken heart
~v.j. facile 3/7/07
(sorry dominique, still a verse/chorus/verse/chorus/bridge/outro style rock/pop song... i actually find it harder to really get a good hook then it is to write a song without a chorus or the like.. hehe did appreciate your comments though, you didn't need to delete them - although some of them i didn't really understand. hope you can still appreciate it)
in other news, having to listen to my own singing over and over again has caused me to enroll in some vocal lessons.. never realized how i tended to sing a bit sharp at times until i started recording digital
"invocations of a broken heart"
www.myspace.com/facile13
was a total BITCH to mix, but here's what I got so far.. questions, comments, constructive criticism is always welcome.
lyrics..
you're an invocation of a broken heart
i knew better from the start
that you still loved him, so why'd we begin
how'd it go this far?
i never thought i'd feel this way
i'm the one who always pulls away
i thought i could take the pain
all away, but you never let me in
so go and float through the night
ride the tides of a thousand faces burning bright
and i'll take it back
this insane crash
of a heart thats cracked and fell too fast
for you..
i still remember the way you kiss
the blood i tasted on your lips
when it seemed like an angelic being
took me over in that state of bliss
you're an invocation of a broken heart
your touch has left me scars
i can't forget, how you took me in
and tore my walls apart
so go and float through the night
ride the tides of a thousand faces burning bright
and i'll take it back
this insane crash
of a heart thats cracked and fell too fast
for you..
fell too fast for you.
and i won't take
i won't call
i won't talk about the past
and if this heart
doesnt break
i'll either find you out there
or you'll float on past...
you're an invocation of a broken heart
an invocation of a broken heart
and i can't stop
this invocation of a broken heart
~v.j. facile 3/7/07
(sorry dominique, still a verse/chorus/verse/chorus/bridge/outro style rock/pop song... i actually find it harder to really get a good hook then it is to write a song without a chorus or the like.. hehe did appreciate your comments though, you didn't need to delete them - although some of them i didn't really understand. hope you can still appreciate it)
in other news, having to listen to my own singing over and over again has caused me to enroll in some vocal lessons.. never realized how i tended to sing a bit sharp at times until i started recording digital