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Diversionary Tactics

Jul 07, 2009 20:54

Title: Diversionary Tactics

Fandom: Battlestar Galactica

Pairing: Kara/Helo, Lee/Other, implied Kara/Lee

Rating: NC-17

Spoilers: "Black Market"

( Helo may be boring sometimes by her standards, but with the way his tongue swirls enticingly against the skin of her neck, she's willing to overlook it. )

bsg, 2009, kara/karl, pilots, nc-17

Comments 12

helikedmyshoes July 8 2009, 02:23:42 UTC

Mm, jealousy is a dish best served HOT. Delicious. So very them at this time in their lives. Love it.

callmeonetrack July 8 2009, 02:35:57 UTC

Heh Loved this at the pornbattle, love it more now.

"What are you doing?

Knitting a sweater."

and

"Man, breasts. React accordingly."

I also loved the bit about the DIFFERENT tension now, and Lee being murderously jealous being a pleasant bonus. Hee.

But the ending...oh, poor Kara. Hurrah for Helo! (Silly pilots.)

daybreak777 July 8 2009, 02:44:38 UTC

Wow, that was great. The pornbattle is like the gift that keeps on giving, really. ;-)

I liked all of it. Most of all Helo, of all things. So kind and such a comfort to Kara. And this:

Her fingers make dents in his biceps.
Something about that line is insanely hot. I don't know if it's Helo's biceps themselves or how hard Kara's gripping them or maybe both together, but wow.

Very enjoyable fic. I'm glad more people are writing Kara/Helo. I had missed them. :-)

somewhereapart July 8 2009, 03:18:51 UTC

Oh how can one go wrong with Kara/Helo and jealous pilots? I love the full version of this, and I just wanna give Kara a hug. Good thing Helo was there to take care of that for me.

Love the dialogue in this, especially

"Kara? What are you doing?" Helo murmurs. Kara grimaces.

"Knitting a sweater," she retorts.

and

"Helo, just this once, can you stop being the good guy?" she demands, and whips her tanks over her head. Helo looks like he's going to protest further and she sighs in frustration, gesturing between them. "Man, breasts. React accordingly."

serenitymeimei July 8 2009, 03:20:21 UTC

This? Was amazingly hot. Like whoa. *fans self* Not only was the characterization spot on, but I could really see the whole thing really happening at some point during the series. Plus, Kara/Helo? There aren't enough fics out there of those two! ♥ Thank you for an awesome, smutty piece!