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Submissions post for Summer Break battle

May 24, 2011 20:45

It's Summer Break, Go Write Stuff Fic and Art Submissions Post

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fic post, it's summer break go write stuff

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Percy/Annabeth: All Grown Up (G) anonymous May 28 2011, 03:25:26 UTC

“Percy, did you get the water bill paid?” Annabeth blew her bangs out of her eyes for the hundredth time as she chased a screaming toddler around the dining room table.

Percy froze, his hand midway between a bowl of strained apricots and his infant son’s waiting mouth. He knew he had to choose his next words carefully. He remembered Annabeth asking him to pay the bill two or three days ago, and he’d meant to, but he got held up at work that day and by the time they finally let him off the post office had been closed...

“Um, no. No I did not.”

“Percy! That was due two days ago!”

Ah, so it was two days ago.

“I’m sorry, Annabeth! I forgot!”

“You can’t just forget to pay the bills, Percy! Now we’re going to get a fine and the electric bill is due tomorrow, and so help me if there’s not going to be enough in the bank account now ( ... )

Re: Percy/Annabeth: All Grown Up (G) dmitchell1985 May 28 2011, 05:08:14 UTC

Not the prompter, but I loved this! :)

Re: Percy/Annabeth: All Grown Up (G) aimmyarrowshigh May 28 2011, 06:33:27 UTC

Very cute!

Re: Percy/Annabeth: All Grown Up (G) ladyeni May 29 2011, 19:24:45 UTC

Prompter here, I loved it!
It's really nice to see them in their future daily lives, and I can totally see Percy forgetting about stuff like bills and deadlines and whatnot.
Hope you write more soon!
BTW, I don't know what happened in the part you had to cut, but I think it's quite fine he way it is :)

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Re: Thalia/Luke, "and she whispers into the empty air 'i love you,'" (angst) [G] sistergrimmel June 1 2011, 15:45:42 UTC

I know, right? Very satisfied prompter here.

Re: Thalia/Luke, "and she whispers into the empty air 'i love you,'" (angst) [G] dmitchell1985 June 4 2011, 02:56:13 UTC

I like the thought of Luke going to visit Thalia and her still being able to hear him. It kind of makes me want to see fic where she's a tree and feels helpless when other heroes come charging up the hill with monster in pursuit.

Penelope Waiting, Jason/Annabeth, lonely hearts, friendship, T (for language) from_elysium June 1 2011, 18:34:59 UTC

First impressions are hard to erase ( ... )

Re: Penelope Waiting, Jason/Annabeth, lonely hearts, friendship, T (for language) dionebacchus June 2 2011, 05:02:05 UTC

That was awesome! I love anything with Jason, and you made him so cool. I love how you made them act together.

Re: Penelope Waiting, Jason/Annabeth, lonely hearts, friendship, T (for language) poptartmuse June 3 2011, 14:57:06 UTC

yayyy jason/annabeth! really well done :)

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Re: "1000 words", Annabeth & Rachel, sketchbook, gen, G dmitchell1985 June 4 2011, 02:53:49 UTC

Rachel looks like a troublemaker! <3

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Re: Piper&Rachel, being rich & famous isn't all it's cracked up to be, (gen) [G] dionebacchus June 4 2011, 02:49:44 UTC

Cute. Nicely written, with good introspective moments. I like it!

Re: Piper&Rachel, being rich & famous isn't all it's cracked up to be, (gen) [G] dmitchell1985 June 4 2011, 02:52:38 UTC

When I saw the prompt posted, I really hoped that someone would pick it. You displayed their similarities beautifully. Well done! :)