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pjlover666

I Never Told You......

Dec 03, 2011 14:44

A one-shot inspired by Colbie Caillat - I never told you

( But I never told you What I should have said No I never told you I just held it in And now I miss everything About you )

fluff, prowlxjazz, drabbles

Comments 11

renegadewriter8 December 3 2011, 14:18:36 UTC

beautiful! Just beautiful! So lovely, poor Prowl having to fight against his logic to see that he did not want a life without Jazz. GREAT JOB!

pjlover666 December 3 2011, 19:51:58 UTC

Thank you hun! ^^

Yes, Prowl realized that he did not want to win a war he had nothing worth fighting for. His logic may see the world black and white, simple equations but then Jazz comes in and brings color to the world, he brings life! I'm glad Prowl had his optics open before it was to late :)

derpcepticon December 3 2011, 17:08:01 UTC

Loved it. ^^

pjlover666 December 3 2011, 19:59:16 UTC

Thank you! I could never bring my self and let them suffer like that (like I said, that was the original plot) But they have suffered so much. So in my head, most of the time they would have happy endings (key word - most of the time)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^^

pxjloverkyoto December 3 2011, 18:10:18 UTC

*wipes at tears* SO lovely~ Poor Prowl, sometimes I really hate that battle computer of his XP Even though it has its moments, it causes nothin' but grief. Awesome fic, hun, can't wait for more~!! <3

pjlover666 December 3 2011, 20:02:32 UTC

Yeah I hate it as well. I wish he could just remove it, but no! He has to be a stubborn, self - sacrificing glitch! >.<

Luckily he has Jazz to bring out the true Prowl out of that barricade he has built around himself thank to that no good battle computer of his!

*hands tissues* Thank you so much for the sweet comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^^

<3 bee_roxs98 December 4 2011, 02:45:25 UTC

OMG! I love it! It is so damn cute!

Re: <3 pjlover666 December 4 2011, 22:15:03 UTC

Thanks Bee! ;)

Oh, the Fluff!!! pseudo_praxian December 20 2011, 04:19:36 UTC

It's so cute!!!! I am going to melt into contented goo from this... And you got me hooked on the song. Now I have to write a oneshot with it.

Beautiful story. The kind that makes fangirl fluff to stick in a throw pillow. Wait... Fluff from this is in my throw pillow! -squees-

I'm insane, can you tell?

Re: Oh, the Fluff!!! pjlover666 December 20 2011, 06:32:13 UTC

Insane is good...I think :D Awwww thanks hun! I'm glad you like the story and song. I can't wait to read your oneshot! ^^

Re: Oh, the Fluff!!! pseudo_praxian December 21 2011, 02:17:41 UTC

It may be in a different fandom, because I could so see a GerIta drabble coming from this... Oh, GerIta is Germany/Italy, from the anime Hetalia- Axis Powers. One of the many slash pairings I support, AKA, makes my inner fangirl freakin' die.

ProwlXJazz forever, though.