Paint me happy [4/?]

Mar 29, 2010 13:38

Title: Paint me happy
Author: Pixziestikxz
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Fluff, angst, drama, AU
Warning: language, sex
Pairing: TaeKey, JongHo, Onkey
A/N: Thanks to argh  for the betaa~ also, I'm sorry for the fail smut that's coming up, but I hope the OnKey fans like this enough. XD

“Jinki-hyung~” Taemin opened the door to the infirmary the next day. Jinki was in ( Read more... )

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xxqod March 29 2010, 19:09:38 UTC
ZOMG SPOT!

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xxqod March 29 2010, 23:15:49 UTC
OMG.
This...

Taeminnie is hurt now, but he kind of deserved it, but Jinki sounded so harsh to him.
He probably had to since Taemin would hold on if he didn't...

And Kibum, that news just made me... gawds.

fuck buddies <3
So sad Jinki wants to be more than that and Kibum doesn't quite feel right about the whole thing of getting together.

It wasn't fail, omg. I was reading it with open mouth XD
COmpletely mesmerized. <3

<3 ~~

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pixziestikxz March 30 2010, 04:32:51 UTC
yeah. Jinki's so mean. D:
But it's Kibum doing all this. >.> lol.

Yeah, he'd hold on. T^T

*sigh* yeah. Kibum. three months. @.@
I'm too sadistic. I kill characters off too much. *.*

hahaha fuck buddies, yes. XD
It would have been Jong Hyun, but Minho kind of claimed him, plus my OnKey bias called on me, so. @.@

Yeah. Kibum's hurting everyone here. T-T

and omg, ty~ lol. just like Jjong in your dp?

-squish-

he is so cute. *.*

ty for the read and comment~ ♥♥

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njrv16 March 29 2010, 21:42:38 UTC
D: I feel so bad for Jinki, he's genuinely head over heals in love for Kibum and Kibum is obviously just using him for the sex.

NOOO!!! this is breaking my love for Onkey T_T but seriously this is the first time I'm saying this but I hope they just broke it up and Kibum goes to Taemin.I'm so not a Taekey shipper but it pains me so much to see my Onkey in such a physical and one-sided relationship that I think it would be better for them to just broke it up, even when Jinki is still going to be in pain. Aish this is so hard!! D:

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pixziestikxz March 29 2010, 23:31:44 UTC
yeah. T^T

I'm sorry~ D: I don't mean to do this, really. I love OnKey. @.@

Yeah. -.- I'm usually not really a TaeKey shipper either, but I found them cute so I wrote this. It wasn't even supposed to go this far. *.* lol.

But bby, I think Jinki would understand. Cuz he's just like that. D: He'd give Kibummie over to Taemin cuz he knows that's probably best for him. -.-

FVFGJHDHJFHJFJGHKJGFDDYWSA. *bricks self*

I break my OTP too much. ;__________________;

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life_not_knife March 29 2010, 22:03:13 UTC
Is it wrong to want kibum to love onew back and they can stay together as a couple...haha lmao, my onkey bias...not my otp..jongkey is my otp, but onkey is second....aww i feel bad for taemin, his poor little heart is probably breaking :'( poor baby . xxxxxx

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pixziestikxz March 29 2010, 23:36:44 UTC
lol no, not at all. XD I want that to happen as well. The sad thing is, it's really not that possible in this story. -.-

JongKey is cool~ I just made them best bitches here though cuz my OnKey bias overpowers them. xD

bah. this is bad. I'm actually more biased towards one pairing than the others. I told myself I wasn't going to do that. *.*

and yeah. *bricks self* I hurt Taemin. Again. At least I didn't kill him this time. I always hurt him. I think I have a problem. T^T

anyways, thanks for the read and comment~ ♥

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ringdingdong19 March 30 2010, 00:35:33 UTC
....I love this in a kind of heartbreaking angsty way hahah XD
But omo jinki is the sweetest or what??
The smut is definitely not a fail~!

Love this<333

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pixziestikxz March 30 2010, 04:33:55 UTC
hahaha it is a heartbreaking and angsty fic, so I guess you're loving it the right way? XD (that sounds weird. lol)

Jinki IS sweet~ ♥♥♥

ah, ty bb. :3

I appreciate the read and comment~ ^^

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paranoiascreams March 30 2010, 08:04:23 UTC
and now im broken.

i dont know who i want key to end up with. It's like... Taemin's just trying his best to be with Key out of regret and pity since now maybe Key's dying and stuff while Jinki may just love key genuinely now.

now it's up to key's decision.

gah! You break my heart beautifully.

and the smut is awesome.

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pixziestikxz March 30 2010, 21:20:41 UTC
ohnoez. I broke you. D: *picks up pieces and takes out masking tape*

lol. it's not out of regret. He never really stopped loving Key, he just wanted to try and forget cuz he thought Key didn't really like him back, and was better off without him, but hearing Key say that his life isn't worth anything anymore cuz Taemin hates him made Taemin realize that he was wrong...or so he thought?

ah, I just confused myself. LOL.

but anyways, thank you. :D

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