I really don't think it's possible for you to run me off-especially not after this. I think that in the bad mood I was in last night I was homing in on some things you may not have really emphasized, but I want to say that I love seeing this kind of depth from you. Atobe's stuff was... I don't know how to describe it, but I mean it in the most flattering way possible when I say it reminds me of the way I process my Atobe muses. He really has a lot of depth and character and he's not perfect. Whatever you do, don't rush the things with depth. You write it nicely, and the reiteration is good. You manage to do it matter-of-factly, without swimming in angst, and it works. Please, please, find it in your heart to give me more of this. <3
but I mean it in the most flattering way possible when I say it reminds me of the way I process my Atobe muses.
And I accept that in the most flattering way possible. It's one thing when you can enjoy someone else's portrayal of a character that you love, but it's quite another when you can relate and recognize your own preferences in it. That doesn't happen to me often, but when it does, I want to climb the author and nibble their ears.
Atobe is not perfect, I agree, and the best thing about this story is that they're older and I can really delve into who they are and what makes them tick without having to make allowances for childhood.
Don't worry, I won't rush it - I have a long way to go with Atobe here and while he won't end up with Tezuka, he'll be settled and happy and I'll have explored his character to my heart's content.
This whole story makes me wibbly. When I write this, I'm always completely taken by it. Rin and Atobe are pitiful. They're all pretty pitiful, actually. Except Ryoma, who is a brat.
Oh, Atobe. I love him. But even his own love seems to be at his leisure, or at his own convenience. The difference between Kite's thoughts on Tezuka and Atobe's were interesting. And Ryoma! He's still such a wonderful brat. I loved when Tezuka called out Kite's name.
And those emails just killed me. The one for the enhancements was perfect.
Thank you for mentioning that. :D I'm trying very hard to show the difference between Atobe's feelings for Tezuka vs. Kite's feelings for Tezuka and why nobody is the bad guy here. Tezuka simply needs certain things in a relationship and Atobe cannot give it to him. Honestly, Atobe doesn't really know what it is that Tezuka is looking for.
Ryoma is a brat - I like writing him all grown up and cocky.
Ahaha, poor Atobe. Fat, drunk and limp. Well, not quite, but it's funny to think about.
♥ I really wanted to give a little more of Atobe here. He loves Tezuka and is not a bad fella, he's just not what Tezuka needs. Ryoma, however... ^___^ Don't worry, Kite is a man on a mission.
I just saw your link and I'm about to open it up. *excited* I don't deserve you!
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But I still love you.
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*smooch* It's good to know I haven't run you off.
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And I accept that in the most flattering way possible. It's one thing when you can enjoy someone else's portrayal of a character that you love, but it's quite another when you can relate and recognize your own preferences in it. That doesn't happen to me often, but when it does, I want to climb the author and nibble their ears.
Atobe is not perfect, I agree, and the best thing about this story is that they're older and I can really delve into who they are and what makes them tick without having to make allowances for childhood.
Don't worry, I won't rush it - I have a long way to go with Atobe here and while he won't end up with Tezuka, he'll be settled and happy and I'll have explored his character to my heart's content.
♥ Thank you, Whit. I appreciate your thoughts.
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And I had three windows of spluff fic open, but I read this first.
I love Higa (and Kite!) more with every chapter. RINRIN. *_____* Oh, and Atobe. :(((
You win, as always. :D
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This whole story makes me wibbly. When I write this, I'm always completely taken by it. Rin and Atobe are pitiful. They're all pretty pitiful, actually. Except Ryoma, who is a brat.
*smooch* Thanks honey - I'm glad you liked it.
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And everyone wants to get their hands on Tezuka's purse bag. Lucky bastard, that bag is.
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Ehehe. Tezuka's purse. :D :D
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And those emails just killed me. The one for the enhancements was perfect.
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Ryoma is a brat - I like writing him all grown up and cocky.
Ahaha, poor Atobe. Fat, drunk and limp. Well, not quite, but it's funny to think about.
Thank you! :D
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I can actually see where Atobe is coming from, and ouch, hopefully Echizen will be a distraction, and as for Kite ...
GO GET TEZUKA!
I have your pic pretty well sketched out, while it's hot, it's also sweeter than I imagined, why is that?
thanks for this.
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not worksafe!
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I just saw your link and I'm about to open it up. *excited* I don't deserve you!
You're welcome - it's my pleasure.
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