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[pixiefiction]

Hmm. It seems that I have finally declared We Don't Live Here Anymore finished. It's in three parts, and it is all angsty. Love?

We Don't Live Here Anymore: Keeping a Nook of Shadow (HP; Gen; 1,383 words; I'm going with PG for general Peter-ness.)

Comments

[great_stoneface]

That was really good! It was painful to read (not because it was bad, of course, but because I really felt for Peter, the little rat). This line particularly got to me:

The boy he became a rat for, when what he really wanted to do was change into James.

*whimper*

[anonymous]

Just like the other two, it was great (my comments are in a werid order, I know) and I especially loved the line 'It is Remus with the broadened shoulders of a man forgetting to smile at anybody but Sirius' because it shows how Remus is completely lost, which was the feeling I got with the others too. Lovely, and thankyou