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sbcaitlin August 6 2012, 12:34:49 UTC
Sooooo creative! Possibly one of my new favorites. :-)

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alien_infinity August 6 2012, 16:43:19 UTC
This was quite creepy! You did a good job with your concept. :)

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n3m3sis42 August 7 2012, 19:49:29 UTC
Yikes. Creepy.

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comedychick August 9 2012, 05:01:20 UTC
"Yes, another acquisition is ready. Female, approximately 23 human years in age. Blonde hair, blue eyes. Ready for immediate extraction.”

Ha! This line really made it for me. I like how you brought back the job he said he had.

As for the ending... I really didn't expect it, but that's what I liked most, I think. That I didn't know where you were going.

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whipchick August 10 2012, 00:46:02 UTC
Totally creepy!

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