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Crescendo of the Moon: (1/?)

Feb 17, 2006 17:26

Title: Crescendo of the Moon
Rating: PG-13 for language, violence, and disturbing images
Pairing: None.
Characters: Dean and Sam
Category: Multi-chapter story falling in the action, drama, and angst categories.
Spoilers: “Pilot” and slight “Home”
Word Count: 1774 (this chapter)
Summary: After a past hunt leaves both Sam and Dean wounded, a new ( Read more... )

supernatural, fanfiction, crescendo of the moon

Comments 12

desertport February 17 2006, 23:23:50 UTC

Oooooh. I like this. The attention to detail really allows me to sink into the story, letting each moment speak in its own voice. I can totally see that gas station, and the cigarette and the nervous clerk, and Sam sprawled in the cramped front seat. Also, this:

A small voice reminded him not to talk with his mouth full, but as his time with Dean progressed, he found such trifle manners depleting in their constant company together and opening up into a closer bond of their private moments.

It made me grin to think that even picking up bad habits can be a sign of intimacy between the brothers.

Cannot wait for the next chapter. Your summary really peaked my interest, and this chapter doesn't disappoint. Thanks!

pixel_0 February 19 2006, 20:43:23 UTC

Maybe it's just me, but when I'm with my close friends or family--i.e. people I feel like I don't need to impress--I forget a lot of my manners, so that's where I pulled that one from for Sam. Also, I'm sure that some of Dean's "roughness" is rubbing off on him by now anyway.

I'm glad you liked the beginning! I'll try to have some more up as soon as I can! Thanks for the review! :)

relativity1953 February 17 2006, 23:33:15 UTC

Wow - great imagery. I can't wait to see where this goes.

pixel_0 February 19 2006, 20:44:00 UTC

I'm glad you liked the imagery...I tend to go a bit overboard with it, so keeping it under control is my biggest problem. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review! :)

skippy_peanuts February 18 2006, 00:00:52 UTC

hmmm this sounds interesting. i look forward to the next installment.

pixel_0 February 19 2006, 20:44:56 UTC

Thanks! I'll try to have the next part up as soon as possible...but good grief, real life takes up way more time than it should some days, I swear. Ugh. Again, thanks for the review! :)

allstar12 February 18 2006, 01:01:08 UTC

Loved it. Hee, a freaky lizard, Im intrigued ;P

I'm all giddy for the new story, Im so curious about it. And the imagery, awesome - as always. I can see all of this and it rocks.

P.S. is it weird that I thought of Crescendo Rising Crust Pizza .. hee.

pixel_0 February 19 2006, 20:47:38 UTC

I'm so giddy for the new story, too! (Is that bad and officially prove that I need to find a hobby outside of work and school besides this? Eh. I'll deal.) And that lizard? Yeah, so he doesn't wear a suit like Mr. Crazed God of the Underworld, but it's a smiling lizard, so...yeah...

Mmm, pizza sounds good right now. Heh.

Thanks for the review, as always! :)

jenshih_blue February 18 2006, 05:16:07 UTC

Ooo...new story. *bounces happily*

Wonderfully descriptive and a vague sense of impending darkness. Which of course was verified by a smiling black lizard on the side of a desert road.

Can't wait to see more hon'. *hugs*

pixel_0 February 19 2006, 20:49:09 UTC

Aren't new stories the best? *grin* Oh, yeah, impending darkness is probably the best thing to be sensing in this story. I've tried writing happy, fluff fics, but I just always seem to return to the angsty darkness. *shrugs* And who doesn't like creepy lizards in their stories? ;)

Thank you for the review! :)