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And he said to me "Darlin Please don't go"

[anonymous]

The jagged trees looked as if demons from hell were clawing back up from the firey pits surrounding the tranquil meadow. A girl sat in the middle panting, her white dress torn to shreds and soaked with blood, her own and others. Her sword lie next to her covered in blood aswell but only her tears glinted off the moonlight. The forest was quiet, not a hoot from an owl, not a squeak from a mouse, and no rustling of the wind through the dead forest leaves. It was as if the woods were petrified of something, or someone. Her blue eyes were misty from her tears, her vision blurred from salty blood that had run into her eyes, and her head throbbing through the pain. A true cold hearted warrior, but now useless, she couldn't even stand up straight without stumbling over herself. Breaking the silence was a crunch of the dead leaves coating the forest floor, then another, they were footsteps and they became louder, faster and closer than before, gradually closing in...on her. She grabbed her sword and stumbled to stand up. Her vision showed double but she could she a clear outline of her attacker, sprinting toward her, dodging through the trees, head down as if a bull would, and sword pointed behind him, placed for an upwards slash. She had no chance, there was not a cut on him, she was defenseless to him. She fell backwards to hit the soft meadow floor and let him finish her off, but he caught her. She looked up at him his silver eyes glinting in the full moons silky beams and his blonde hair falling infront of his face. He looked down at the wounded warrior he had just caught in his arms. "My fallen angel has awoken," he said quietly brushing the tears and blood off her cheeks. She closed her eyes "but I promise you I will not let my angel leave me again" He set her down gently and sat down next to her stroking her hair. "Death and Destruction will rain, now that the Angel Of Chaos has been reunited with I" He chuckled a little and sheathed his sword. "They won't get away with this" He said holding her hand "I promise you that."