[B.A.P] October Skies (1/1)

[chiharu]

Title: October Skies
Fandom: B.A.P
Author: chiharu
Characters/pairing: Daehyun/Youngjae
Rating: PG
Wordcount: ~4,300
Summary: TS Entertainment's Jung Daehyun is Yoo Youngjae's biggest rival for this year's Rookie of the Year Award, but that's just half the story. AU! For roebling

Comments

[chiharu]

spot for saire~

[chiharu]

Yayy I'm glad you liked it~ I really like to play with YJ's insecurities, especially since he seems to have grown so much these days n____n Daejae bromance gives me life. Confident Youngjae is the best Youngjae. <3

[bictory]

DAEJAEDAEJAEDAEJAE I AM SCREAMING this is SO CUTE, starting from the very first scene, ahaha 15& sunbaenims keke, all the little callbacks, like Minjun-hyung (poor baby ;__;) and "rap duo" (which at the end was revealed I suppose, but I freaked out about it when I first saw it!) and ahahaha you are brilliant.

how do I even pick out parts I liked? How about them ALL?? How do you make every single scene so interesting and adorable and alskdfjgh???? And your characterization of both Daehyun and Youngjae is spot on, HOW???? I AM SO FLOORED BY THE EFFICIENCY OF EVERYTHING.

Youngjae gave up on looking away from Daehyun months ago. I FEEL YOU BRO ;____; your Youngjae is the best, his dissatisfaction with his idol career and fear of being underwhelming. And the way he listens to EVERYTHING Daehyun says and picks up on the most insignificant things alsdkfhg I LOVE THEM

[chiharu]

hehehhhe you know I love BANG N ZELO~ DAEHYUN IS SO SHAMELESS THAT HE'S SUPER EASY TO WRITE. and yep yep I had lots of fun writing 15& in hehehe I used to like JYPE a lot u___u Idk about efficiency. I think I'm just.... lazy um. hehehe your comments are so cute. /pets you

[zqlin]

OH GOD THAT WAS SO ADORABLE, I'M GRINNING SO HARD

daejae's relationship in this is so nice and natural, i love how everything just falls into place for them, even with the little misunderstanding, and that they still have that competitive side to their relationship while youngjae's still able to confide in daehyun when he gets insecure about his debut ;~~~; the part where they meet and youngjae's putting his cap ontop of daehyun's head is so perfect omg i loved that, and then

"Youngjae walks back to the dorm that night with Daehyun’s number in his phone, grinning when Hansuk asks why it took him so long. He forgets the peppero and his hat, but gains something potentially dangerous and exciting." sobs TT TT

"Jaebum and Junior are in the front of the audience, wearing matching shirts of Youngjae’s face along with Yerin and Jimin. They chant Youngjae’s name during his first track, waving strange balloons in excitement." cutest omg

the end is adorable, ugh daehyun would give youngjae the flowers and their hug just... sounds so nice ;o

[chiharu]

Daejae is incredibly easy to write b/c their dynamic feels so natural. I actually struggled writing this because they jumped into this bromace so quickly ;~; I'm glad you liked it! thank you for reading~

[tyreling]

This is really cute~ I love the what if situation in which BAP never happened and Youngjae and Daehyun are somehow friends through a chance meeting. The confession scene was adorable and i really love the ending part where daehyun gave youngjae a big bouquet that's supposed to be for yongguk and zelo. XDD I've enjoyed this a lot. :D I really hoped there's more of this verse.

[chiharu]

hehe Daehyun would be shameless like that :3

Thank you for reading~

[yeolcarp]

This fic warms my heart. The friendly competition is so sweet and I love how comforting each one of them is. And ugh the way Youngjae gains more confidence is adorable, as well. This was so lovely and enjoyable to read :)

[chiharu]

It's so nice to see Youngjae's gradual incline in confidence :33 He's such a great kid. Ty for reading~