Fic: The Misbegotten, Chapter 7

Apr 21, 2010 06:16


Title: The Misbegotten, Chapter 7
Author: Piratelf
Rating: R (for strong language)
Fandom: Gilmore Girls and Supernatural crossover inspired by, but in no way a part of the whatwekeep 'verse.
Disclaimer: Gilmore Girls and Supernatural belong to their respective owners, bought and paid for. I am not one of the owners, more's the pity. The AKB 'verse was ( Read more... )

john winchester, gg, spn, d.j., misbegotten, dean forester, spn fpg

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sidura April 21 2010, 21:19:15 UTC
Yeah, you're back!!!!!

Please say that there is more or will be soon as I want to find out not only what is going to happen to DJ but the poor soul's back story.

As for the scene in the bathroom - didn't expect that, though it is very well written.

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piratelf April 21 2010, 21:31:07 UTC
Yeah, you're back!!!!!

Thanks for the wonderful reception!

Please say that there is more or will be soon as I want to find out not only what is going to happen to DJ but the poor soul's back story.

There is more, but I can't promise how soon. Sorry!

As for the scene in the bathroom - didn't expect that, though it is very well written.

Thank you very much! I wanted to suggest what sort of dangers are out there for slaves.

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sidura April 21 2010, 22:20:50 UTC
No don't say that you don't know how soon, I just got use to the idea that there was more to this story!!!

As for the dangers slaves have to live with - it sounds a scary world that DJ lives in, going one minute convinced his master is going to make him do things to the point where strangers can attack him with impunity. It's a surprise that any slave is sane.

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piratelf April 22 2010, 04:22:16 UTC
No don't say that you don't know how soon, I just got use to the idea that there was more to this story!!!

I'm sorry! I just became a "Mom" to my 14 year old niece, and that may eat up some time! *LOL*

As for the dangers slaves have to live with - it sounds a scary world that DJ lives in, going one minute convinced his master is going to make him do things to the point where strangers can attack him with impunity. It's a surprise that any slave is sane.

Well, in my world, slaves owned by the rich are relatively safe, except from their master's and mistresses themselves. Either the are kept isolated, only there to do their job, as Dean was with Lord Gilmore, or they travel always with their Masters/Mistresses, especially in the case of bodyslaves. Two things led to what happened to Dean in the bathroom. First< John isn't a slave owner, knows nothing about slaves, he should have accompanied a young, inexperienced slave like Dean into someplace like a public bathroom. Second, Dean was dressed in new clothes, but they were from a ( ... )

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sidura April 25 2010, 15:03:04 UTC
Sorry it has taken me so long to reply.

I do hope real life and being a 'mom' doesn't take up too much of your time as I really would love to read more of this.

I do like the thought you've put into your world, it does sound a scary place with many unwritten rules and I do like the fact that John is trying with DJ. Though I would love to see Dean's reaction when he finally meets DJ.

I would like to find out if he's going to stand behind John's actions of teaching DJ how to protect himself, considering the reprecussions for DJ if anything goes wrong or is he going to bundle his possible slave half brother up and take him to someone who would be able to keep him out of hunting but still be able to protect him, i.e. Sam.

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piratelf April 26 2010, 01:26:34 UTC
Sorry it has taken me so long to reply.

Never a problem!

I do hope real life and being a 'mom' doesn't take up too much of your time as I really would love to read more of this.

Believe me, I really would love to write more of this! So don't give up hope yet!

I do like the thought you've put into your world,

Thank you!

it does sound a scary place with many unwritten rules and I do like the fact that John is trying with DJ. Though I would love to see Dean's reaction when he finally meets DJ.

Oh me too! ;)

I would like to find out if he's going to stand behind John's actions of teaching DJ how to protect himself, considering the reprecussions for DJ if anything goes wrong or is he going to bundle his possible slave half brother up and take him to someone who would be able to keep him out of hunting but still be able to protect him, i.e. Sam.

Those are both interesting choices. I think Sam will have something to say about it all as well.

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